Reviews of Runes of Hecate
Runes of Hecate
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There are times when authors know too much about their plot, they tend to forget even the smallest details that might make a big difference when telling a story. The thing that I love the most about this one is how well the words are being used altogether to make sure the readers fully understand what the author is trying to portray in the story. Good job, author! Keep it up! Looking forward to more chapters!! To anyone who might be reading the reviews at the moment and haven't read this one, please do read!! :)
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I guess it's time for tradition. Shameless review! Because I really did put my all into this work :joy: To all of those who support me, thank you all very much. I hope you like my work as much as I do. It may not be much at this point, but don't worry. You'll have the peace of mind, knowing that the author is trying his best to become better everyday. YSP out!
Hello, your novel has been assessed and review by Virtual Bookshelf. A review excerpt is as follows: Technical: Punctuation and grammar is on point. Just a few technical errors that can fixed with basic proofreading such as, “It was good that Klaud didn't press further.” - misspelling of Klaus. Prologue: This sets up Aeon’s love and interest in magic as well as the basic idea of this world. Not the most interesting starter, but it’s clear and does it’s job of setting up the story. Technical note: the Dad’s story to his son doesn’t need to have each sentence as a new line/paragraph. The subjects should be grouped into a form like this (ellipses to shorten the text): "A long, long time ago…the five elements. "However, … Magic, Hecate. "She took pity …. vitality! "Shortly after, … one of the elements. "That, my boy, is the origin of magic." Characters: Aeon, Suri, Korona - Their first fight together is way, way too long. Even though you did a great job of all the little actions and details, it simply prolonged for too long across about 10 chapters. And even after this, all their adventures together mainly consist of very long fights or class-material explanations and discoveries. Montis, Klaus, Bell, Rigel, Levi, Dan, Doru, Gavin, Mark, Samuel, Selena, Harold - Except for the main 3 along with Levi and Klaus, there are too many characters to keep track of with little differentiation between them that would grant them particularly memorable or unique. Some are mentioned again in later events like Mark and Dan, but generally it feels like the characters filled in a certain role and then didn’t have any later importance. .........(cont.) The full review is linked to your title on: https://virtualbookshelf.home.blog/2019/02/02/webnovel-assessments-10/ After three chapters, you may request to be assessed again. Thank you, and the best of luck on your writing endeavors! :)
Today, i find another hidden gem, just binge read to chapter 33, I enjoyed the sidekick characters being "truly" side characters...... Nice finishing with some fun dialog.... Keep up the good work author san..... I hope you release more quality chapter.... I'll be waiting for more.... Got 5 stars from me to boost your novel position .... My Review will be vary later, but I'm quite satisfied.
Writing Quality: Normal, detailed. Stability of Updates: Standard. Story Development: Sorry, the protagonist just follows what the author wants. Forcing the plot to go the way he wants, which makes many situations that were preventable occur, the protagonist despite having "suffered" because of his own recklessness remains reckless and even this punishment has a very weak effect, since, not It makes a difference (I would prefer that he had lost the game to enter the magic academy, and had entered the military academy, would bring more weight in history), so the training arc is horrible, shows nothing new, and when it arrives at the arch of great change of great importance to the protagonist who also randomly creates a sword technique and (as random as) has a burst in its magical constitution without reason, effort and without showing the limit of ancient constitution, meaningless things and that despite want to put some logic, the logic itself is flawed (because the hell they were in a forest full of animals stronger than them, acting strangely, grouping etc, and not only not reporting when they did not run away, that is, when they went to run away, he coincidentally finds stronger animals that will kill them, then the protagonist who was "sleeping" wakes up and finds a way with things easily), then when going to report the It happens that they choose the fastest among them to be snorted, the protagonist, so he arrives at the right time to do the right thing bla bla bla. abstract: protagonist and author with heroin syndrome, nobody dies. not to a differentiation between stronger and weaker, since the protagonist defeats or manages to escape everything, the classification of bad mages does not limit and continually make people who are not at the level do things above their level, the teachers who they should be smart and knowledgeable act childish and inexperienced (going out into a clearly foreign forest and unable to escape when they get into trouble, but the protagonist manages to shiver with anger and pay no attention to the sores etc., while less experienced students stay calm ) Character Design: One-dimensional World Background: Complete But Relatively Fragile And Shallow It would be nice if the author read The Avalon Of Five Elements, there is a good reaction to what happens when you see something giving a lot of ****, although you have the same problem of not giving time for the protagonist to grow up alone, so there are many excuses for him to have Several bursts and even more to defeat opponents that he clearly cannot, good example of giving time to the protagonist are in city of sin and invincible salamanter.
Can I just say this is one kind of the story that I have read here? The plot is amazing, it glides the readers smoothly through the read. The character development and writing proficiency is just great, couldn't find a single error. 5 stars for it. Of course, this one goes straight to my library. Hope you keep updating more chapters!
First thing I want to say is *HIDDEN GEM* and secondly, is that this is one of those magic novels who really know how it should go. Non of that *Mc plot armour saves the world with -49 health* but PROPER WRITING! The beautifully described environment, and the ******, yet intriguing first chapters already sets you of to a great start. Please, do keep it up! :) Love the kind of personality you have given MC. This goes straight to fav!
I've read the first 5 chapters, and I was instantly hooked. Honestly, I wasnt really expecting anything big, but his content really surprised me. For a new entry, I can say that this has a lot of potential to be a good novel. For those who have doubts in reading this novel, you should really try, it is worth it.
