letter to the readers

Just when the evil fire was about to be quenched,

The evil doers add more fuel to the flame,

Just when she was about to overcome the wrench,

They decide it is time to add more to the pain,

And now the evil fire burns uncontrollably,

Razing every wall built by the enemy,

This fire would no longer be stopped,

Until the body of the last enemy is dropped.

this Is the beginning of the real story what do see about the story so far your comments please is needed