Reviews of A GLITCH in Another World
A GLITCH in Another World
Yushirou
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- Character Design
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Hello author, this is part of the reviewed swap. Sorry for the late delivery of review quite busy in the real world. Hehehe. Btw, Honestly to review a book consisting of a chapter of three is quite tough to a reviewer like me although your writing is good. The story, character, and background are still lacking. But your work is good and I encourage you, my fellow author, to keep writing. Stars. Writing 5 Update 5 (availability of authors time) Story 4 Character 4 Background 4 God bless
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I really love the idea of this novel I really hope the author continues it I always like mc's who are op. I also hope that he can maybe make his own kingdom and that now that hes alive again he doesnt die for stupid reasons and he also continues to gain more power and doesnt look for someone to solve all of his issues.
As of my review, only two chapters have been posted; not really much I have to get off on. The writing is... not unreadable, I guess. I was reading properly in the beginning, but I just skimmed through the last few paragraphs. It needs a little work. The format feels more like a visual novel without the graphics. You know, those texts you read when you play a visual novel game (like Doki Doki Literature Club, to name one)? As the author has said in one of the random Author's Notes in the middle of the second chapter, the first few chapters were meant as an introduction, and apparently is not the main story, If the author had not specified that, I would have roasted them for being too rushed and abrupt. (Tip: instead of breaking readers' immersion in the story, why don't you use the Author's Note box feature? Or leave the explanation at the end so people won't be annoyed. By people, I meant me) Nevertheless, I'll give you a four stars rating so you won't be too discouraged. Giving a bad rating for a novel with only two chapters is a bit too harsh for me. Do your best, good luck!
