Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Integration

Please, you need an editor

The writing or English starts to get better at chapter 18. So, just hold on a bit. Then at chapter 33 or 34 he has started to has for help finding and editor. Then at about chapter 36 the editor starts editing and it is much better.

How did MC survie when everyone else died?

So I read this novel at night where I don't read as half good when at day. And many comments (I mean really many comments) stated that the author needed an editor. So as a curious bastard that I am, I read one block of text serieusly and oh boy~, my dear author... YOU NEED AN EDITOR

Why call them red nail rats then call them acri rats in following paragraphs?

ya need fast updates

If you don't have an editor, please improve your language and your writing. There are still many mistakes

Up until the refinement and combat exercise, I thought the main character had at least attained some level of intelligence, that is until he decided to commit suicide but still think he would not die. [Common sense, patience?.] [Just another greedy, immature child, really irritating].

The fucking uses of powerhouse with low level characters makes me angry as it just doesn't make any fucking sense, not only that the mc is kinda retarded.

exp

Hey 🤩 just gave 3 votes . More chapters release pls if u got any stored

so the story so far reminds me of another story i read a while ago. A boy who at the coming of age bonds with a mutated ghost moth and goes by train to a new city to fight monsters and grow stronger. along the way, he meets a young lady and her minder, and the train is attacked by bug monsters, and he is in the back of the train. when he comes out, the survivers are in a horseshoe formation with their monsters fighting, and backup is days away. now I'm not sure when that story was written, and I can't even remember what it's called. I'm also not saying plagiarism. I just thought the similarity was interesting. Now, if things get worse and mc steps up to save the young lady with fire wolf and gets spoken down to by her minder and her Minder ends up almost letting mc die then it'll be more similarities.

Nicr

exp

How did the mc survive without an editor?? All jokes aside I enjoy this novel so far, hopefully the editor I heard rummors in the comments will make it even more enjoyable!

Giving 4*'s because I am choosing to believe that the engrish will get better. If it does not I will drop to 2*'s until I stop reading.

Fire

Daily

thanks