Comments of chapter undefined of Monster Integration

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I just read that these have been edited already. If that is so, the author needs to fire their editor. It’s horrendous.

Hey Author I'm a bit confused does Ashlyn have fur? Or feathers? She is a bird right? Why wright fur all the time? Or Is it that she does really have a fur due to the mutation. Please care to explain Author

The writing or English starts to get better at chapter 18. So, just hold on a bit. Then at chapter 33 or 34 he has started to has for help finding and editor. Then at about chapter 36 the editor starts editing and it is much better.

amazing concept, hope you don't drop this after some time like others :)

So as a introductory chapter this was horrible. I know more about some bird names ashlyn then I know about the mc and their surroundings. Hell I don’t even know if the mc is a boy or girl or their name just that they have a special girls named ashlyn.

Reading this in the first person present perspective is really hard. It doesn't flow correctly and it's annoying to convert all the verbs into past 3rd person.

It is not a fur but feather...and why is her patents sparrow also silver i thought she was mutated.

Nope, wont happen

Are you sure you edited this chapter?

Editor is complete garbage

Errrrr future monster waifu??

Hm

Anyone else thought of the connection between the Theme and Name Ashlyn which reminds of Ash?

Thx

I did not Start reading this novel for some stupid chicken, which i can eat at McDonalds every time i want

Good story

They went to have lunch at the breakfast table, where breakfast was waiting....Are you ready for your dinner Ashlyne? Mother asked....lol also you don't brush feathers, and no comment on the rest of the mistakes....DID YOU SAY STAKE???😏😏😏

Seriously I can’t tell if this is just bad writing from the author, or bad machine translation. Quick. Instead of quickly. Doesn’t really make sense. There are at least a dozen errors in this first, but for some reason, second chapter. It’s terribly distracting

i got confused about the species, Gray Spark Sparrow and Ashlyn mutated to Silver Spark Sparrow? or Silver Spark Sparrow and Ashlyn mutated (looks/nature) but still Silver Spark Sparrow? Mostly because i saw the Sparrow parents are called Gray Spark and later Silver Spark. so yeah.