Still hoping that you finish this story...
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hey buddy don't drop story or else i will curse you............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Is it dropped already i mean it's already almost half a month or so , or is there still a possibility for it to continue since the story was really good π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§π§
The grammar is okay as there are still noticeable mess ups in each chapter but they are small. Also he has a stable update rate which is good. For world background, I gave it a 2 as you are just taking a pre made world and also in my opinion youβve meshed the world with others like love live which I donβt really like but overall itβs still good. Now on to the bad parts, in my opinion: I gave a 1 on story development as the character doesnβt develop much or at all in my opinion. Like he was a troubled kid for a couple of chapters and then becomes the incarnation of a perfect man for the rest. In addition the story of filled with filler. I believe the only reason that the story is actually developing is because thereβs an existing template/timeline that the other does use. I gave a 2 in character design because the only good point about the characters personalities are that I sorta liked the protagonist. But the rest is absolute hogwash as all the characters are one dimensional as ****. The protagonist is just a stereotype of an edgy perfect character who I think has slight or i mean excessive 8th grader syndrome. The author also turns the other characters he takes from other stories who were previously multi dimensions and flattens them into a one dimensional character. In my opinion the story is something you could read just to waste time without any need of investment other than time.
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What happen to CHAPTER 140 AKIKAN SAMA! Gshsjsjsksksisksksk Auajajkakakakakakaka Hsjsjsjsjsjskskks Shshjsjsksososishusbsns Jsjxnxjxnbxbxnxixixi
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Greatest story ever, love the unique power that totally works with the weird but cool powers in BNHA!! Hope Akikan can release more chapters especially on his patreon
Dude what kind of coffee were u drinking? I wanna know what it is and need some of that. πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
would you continue this story I will donate every day please finish this story
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Come on man you should continue with the writing, you are really good at it, I liked this one especially!! Good and refreshing fan fic, and very different from the ones being posted nowadays.[img=recommend]πππ
Hey man, just wanted to ask is there any chance for u to resume this novel? I really liked it and would definitely recommend reading it. BTW, BIG FAN of all your other works too. Keep up the good workπ
when is the story gonna continue, it's already been too frickin long. I may be a newbie in this department but this is really annoying just to wait.
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