Reviews of The Prince Hidden in the Shadows- Fanfic

I WANT TO GET THAT EXP! LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! TO GET EXP IS MY REAL TEST! TO LEVEL UP IS MY CAUSE! I WILL TRAVEL ACROSS THE LAND! SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE! EACH SPIRIT STONE TO UNDERSTAND! THE POWER THAT'S INSIDE! EXP! GOTTA CATCH THEM ALL! IT'S YOU AND ME! I KNOW IT'S MY DESTINY! EXP! OH, YOU'RE MY BEST FRIEND! IN A SECT WE MUST DEFEND! OUR HEARTS SO TRUE! EXP WILL PULL US THROUGH! YOU TEACH ME AND I'LL TEACH YOU! EXP!

Great history.. Mc is cool (last chaps) Recommended :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-)) :-))

First, I have to give points where points are due. The author has a really impressive update stability, which means you don't have to wait long before the next chapter. Well done author. Now, on to why I give this story such a low review. As many others have already said, the story is basically a carbon copy of the original Harry Potter series by J.K. Rowling. The plot of the story doesn't change at all, and you basically only get the story from the viewpoint of our MC Arth. Said MC is ignored at pretty much every oppotunity where he could impact the story and its course in any meaningful way. It's a little sad to see a story with so much potential go down the "cope & paste" route, as so many other stories have done. Now, I could continue to complain about carbon copies and lost oppotunities to explore a new potential of the Harry Potter universe, but I think many other reviewers have touched upon that enough. All in all it was an interesting starting premise and I quite enjoyed it at the start. But after the constant "copy & paste", lost oppotunities and minimal changes to the story, I have to give my honest opinion, and give the story this low ranking. I hope the story improves in the future, but I doubt it. TDLR: It's pretty much just a "copy & paste" story of the Harry Potter series. You'll get almost the excact same story with minimal changes.

Good,very good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very good novel it's a logical new character and takes a bit that new character impact a story because they character does not have advanced knowledge of the plot

My hate for Harry and the absolutely useless Ron (like a pebble would do more than him) really comes out while reading this novel. Like the Mc deserves better friends! When in the start u talked about how the mc will be a part of ravenclaw later, I was really looking forward to it. I hoped he would find a better group of friends there. Especially after Harry broke his friendship with the mc. Unfortunately they become friends again.... I mean Harry and Ron are only ever taking advantage of him, they do not ever care about weather he is hurt mentally or physically, they are so selfish!! But if we exclude them then the story is great, I enjoy your thinking process on the magical society and it's arts and I like the mc's character buildup too( really brings out his age and personality) . Love how he and Luna spends time too. It's not too late, I yet think you should let him make his own group of better friends( hope I'm not overstepping my bounds as a reader here:#)

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I thought this book was alright, which is a shame because the premise of not being reincarnated or transmigrated is rare. I hope that if you decide to do edits make the character development between harry and art where the whole "i hate you!" "BE MY FWEND!" again situations should be better put together because i thought that was a horrible part of the book. Another point i hope you as an author take from this experience of writing this book is that when a mc becomes a support it is incredibly frustrating to the reader and the fact that he is an 'incredibly smart' individual without much results after studying also a problem. Other than that great book!

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Nice new cover author! Please keep up the good work! Most of the readers here really appreciates your work despite the bashings and the criticisms of other readers. I'm also hoping for more chapters author hehhehe I'm being shameless here 😇. Have a great day!

To read this story you a patient first later you will understand the meaning of this story. Everything is not coincidence. Magic is more than that, our Arthur will tell you more about all we want to know, some that even the real story will never give you, a new exciting fun, The story will begin with WHAT WILL HAPPEN IF YOU HAVE A FRIEND OF "HARRY AND FRIEND"? Arthur : Well is never been great anyway, Harry and Ron love trouble. Like it never stop them even snape snap at you. Hermione : Arthur is right. (Shy looked at arthur) Ron : Arthur actually not handsome at all. (Said Grudgely) Harry : Is always fun and exciting when you with Arthur. He always out of the box.

Aye Cross!!!! You're uploading this novel back up! Please dont drop again lol and team scarth!

I, honestly loved this story so much and I couldn't understand why so many were quick to **** on it. I highly recommend anyone that's a fan of Harry Potter or fantasy novels because this gets a huge recommendation from me!

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A vary good novel , fan fictio tnk to the author ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Hello mr author i have been wondering for a few days if it would be at all possible to bring it up to chapters a day because i really love your work but i can only reread it so many times for one chapter a day so if it is at all possible could you please bring to chapters to my world instead of one your fan / have a lovely day either way thank you for all your hard work your doing wonderful work thank you so very much

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Actually i almost did not start reading this book because of the reviews, but i decided to give it a try. I'm now at chapter 56 and i started reading yesterday, from volume 2 onwards it gets much better :)

5* for the Gordon Ramsay moment in chapter 71. It is f*cking hilarious. HAHAHA HAHAHA!!!!!!! FYI it is a really good fanfic with good character build up. It might get bit slow in the early on but it is really good.