Reviews of Start by Becoming a Mangaka

Writing Quality: 2 star = The grammar is very messy, it feels like I am reading a novel from lmntl, but its more confusing. Its still understandable to say the least so 2 stars. Stability of Updates: 5 star = Author keeps releasing a lot of chapters which is nice. Story development: 1 star = I have read the author works before and I realized that he keeps wanting to push this novel in the same direction as Hitose note, which was way better than this. The only difference is, some new anime like Detective conan is added and instead of taking Raku's place author went for his brother. The relationships are awkward, I get that, its the type of novel were MC is great and every girls keeps falling for our MC but this is the same place where the author fails and makes this novel worse than Hitose note or any other novel he wrote before. The girls keep falling for MC but Author keeps cock blocking himself, even though we all know that he will have s*x with the girl a chapter later on. Character design: 1 star: Even though the characters are from other animes, author fails to maintain the character's behaviors even though he doesn't have to think about any of them. (I know its hard to write and bla bla bla... but these characters already exist in other works, so its just copying the character's characteristics but author still fails to do so.) Let's leave the other character's for now, but the author can't decide even on the MC characteristics. Sometimes he is dense, sometimes he is way to clever and flirty, sometimes he is a gentleman but other time is a creepy pervert. He keeps acting like every girl belongs to him even though sometimes he keeps stopping himself from getting them. Like make your mind, do you want them or not. And the characters, Every chapter at least 5 new characters are introduced and every one of them sounds and acts like a harem candidate, By the count of it, MC is fu*king every women in his town. I am on chapter 58 right now and I lost count of how many girls there are by the 10th chapter. World Background: 2 Star = The world is very confusing since a lot of different anime's are cramped into one place. But props to the author for trying but it could be done better. Conclusion: I am not hating on author or his work like I said, I liked his previous novel before but I am quite disappointed since instead of improving he went downhill from what he created. If you want to read this novel keep in mind that its not going to be sophisticated in the very least. Its like a very plain ****** novel written by a hyped up author, who wants to make his novel good but it turns out bad. It's not that bad like some novels in this site but its not good either. If you want to binge read something due to you having a lot of free time, go ahead and read this novel. I suggest author to focus on making a single chapter perfect than releasing 10 in a day. Quality over Quantity.

Harém? 😍😍 Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. 😎😎

It was good at first, but the MC becomes progressively more scummy. Like honestly at first he seemed like an okay dude, then it seemed like the author just decided to throw all that out the window and replace his whole personality. It's REALLY odd because he seems to relapse back into this persona with a drop of a hat. It started around when the MC was smoking with Eriri in the room. I mean, dude, not cool. He was also being a prick by essentially telling her to just deal with it. From that point on he turns into some 'tough guy' but then lapses back into his gentleman persona whenever he meets a girl that has zero compatibility with said personality. Like for instance he meets Nishimiya Shouko(poor girl) and all of a sudden he's back to his pure and fawning over cute things persona even going so far as to sign "Will you be my friend?". At that point I was pretty frustrated but since I already invested some time I decided to just charge through until I could go no further. I kept on reading until the time he has a one-night stand with Valmet and I just could not continue. The biggest problem I have with this is that he got all pissed off at Ranko for literally throwing herself at him calling her and I quote, "a cheap girl". Then he does this around 10 chapters later? Fucking hypocrisy at it's finest. I would also like to mention that this MC has girls that would willing join a harem for him yet he decides he would be okay with prostitutes while in Dubai. Like seriously, THE FUCK. I am being incredibly generous still giving this a three. The only reason I did is because of the sheer amount of different fandoms this author included and the fact I can recognize every single one. Also, Avalon doesn't work as described here. I have a lot more I could say, but **** it. I am done.

Good story, different kind than other fanfic out there, not copy from another fanfic out there, good author cause often mass release. I don't mind with grammar cause not everone in the world use english as their 1st language

Good story Interesting anime mashup Funny MC with his leg fetish Complex romance Don't forget to bring Rocket Launcher on Dubai trips Waifu of the year

Wow just wow. The 850th chapter is becoming boring with the authors copypasting dxd novel. And the mc who is supposed to be op is weak to approdisiac and just fvcks random girls given to him by the enemy forgetting that his gf's are in danger. I mean sigh. 🤬🤬🤬

All these fanfics with mixed stories in it are the best! The release rate is even better haha xD 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140

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Fuk Rainlink who left more than 72 5* reviews here with word “Harem” basically this story is not worth it. Grammar and spelling mistakes and author doesn’t give a fuk. No storyline, no logic.

This novel is going down the drain. Lazy writing and copy pasting has taken over what once was a very interesting novel. That along with the author forgetting his own events that have happened and revealing information to surprised characters that have heard this information more than 600 chapters ago, makes this one very disappointing novel.

It is even worse than the "endless path" seemingly far ... but no, it has surpassed! I had enough for 10 chapters of this **** .. after that, I realized that this would only cause irritation and wasted time, and again I do not know what “it” does in category 18+. After all, he has a negative attitude towards hentai, as well as a very flat and cardboard character in terms of ***. A score of 1 point is what this story deserves.

Don't worry author-kun, I'm here to save you. Sure, the grammar and all that stuff may need some fixing in more ways than one. But, your novels are really good and are getting better in terms of the flow and other details which includes your grammar. So, don't let these haters that like hating get to your head. And keep writing! Cause you will only get better at doing this sort of stuff. Man, I wrote a lot. Probably one of my biggest reviews. 👍

There is a good chance that something will upset you in this novel. Rape, underaged girls, gender bender romance with the MC, poor grammar, pointless filler (more than 50 chapters in a row without the MC), completely ignoring the system he reincarnated with because you gave him the power to do almost anything imaginable as his first power; due to aforementioned there is almost no character growth. The MC’s character was initially consistent but later became whatever the author needed him to be to romance every single anime girl imaginable while experiencing every fetish known to man.

wow wow wow this novel is too amazing!!!!!!!!!writting style is good , the plot is good every thing is perfect , i like novel , i only read a dragon ball fanfiction in this site but now i will start reading your novel to , thanks brother for this great work

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Good story, different kind than other fanfic out there, not copy from another fanfic out there, good author cause often mass release. I don't mind with grammar cause not everone in the world use english as their 1st language View More

This is a solid work so far. It has a reasonable pace and a decent style. Some editing would benefit the novel, but its grammatical flaws rarely stifle the novel's flow. While characters seem to be added exceptionally quickly, I'd assume this will be slowed down exponentially in the future when the novel's main and side characters are fully introduced. In it's current twenty chapter state, I would recommend this novel.

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Yo shameless review from the editor here. I would like this review to go to those that complain about the poor grammar. If you want, wait a bit, I am editing 2 chapters a day and if I feel like it more. I really love this novel and the author is a really skilled guy and shouldn't have his talent measured by the language he isn't skilled in. How many of you that are native English speakers can speak Spanish/German/French etc? Give it a chance, you won't regret it.

I am, disappointed by this story. Honestly, I expected more when I read the reviews, but after I started reading the story, I realised that this was a story that I had dropped. Anyway, I tried to read it again and I realised that I wasn't wrong dropping it the first time. The girls are easy, just like in the authors other book. The MC is a dumb, vain idiot that thinks more with his dick since he knows he has ridicuolous plot armor. Every chick in there seems to be fine with a harem. I mean, this won't happen in real life man😪. Other than that, why oh why does EVERY GIRL fall for the guy. Like even other randoms in his school would fall for the guy. Not just admiration for his looks, but all out falling in love. Like... WTF!? This novel went from having a great start to all out wish fulfilment. Like every single anime the MC ever watched and every manga he read will have it's characters living in this world. And every girl from the normal and supernatural side will also fall for the guy.😒 This novel is shit. How do I know it's shit? Because even a novel addict like me is reluctant to read it. And I mean that literally. I'd rather daydream than force myself to continue anymore. I mean... Between chapter 1 and chapter 200, I managed to squeeze in 2 other new books and caught up with their authors... Damn. This is seriously shit...😐😑