AvlyDarkz
There is an undiscovered gem here!! I only have enough courage to read until chapter 4 but, if you are a female reader this will be different. Story is well-planned and you'll lose yourself in it. You'll curse your parents with not having one more brain or an extra eye on your forehead to read faster. Writing style too awesome. Every sentence following each other as if they are in a kind of rule, like a poem. I mean, there are many novels i feel eye-tired while reading but... Damn hard to explain, read yourself you'll understand. To male readers, -Female MC < if this detail important for you. -NTR < (Netorare= A man steals other man's girl. Also girl like new guy). Thats something you must be ready if you wanna read. Girls hate harem. Boys hate NTR. So well, I need to say author's style is awesome and if this novel doesn't have enough attention, the only reason novel's name is not "A rich and handsome CEO wants me badly *moans*" . I recommend this exciting novel to every female reader.
Regret (lyrics) . when i think of the things we did it makes me want to cry love was in your eyes were you telling lies? why was I so unwise? when i held you near you whispered in my ear you were so sincere when i think of the things we did it makes me want to cry now i know you never gave a damn you leaked our love on instagram
Simple yet complex, requirement upon reading... must be psychologically strong and emotionally stable. Moving forward... though I would disagree to some of its approach, but it is a matter of perspective and environment that the individual live to tell the tale. I can say that its not my right to complain nor correct, however as sensitive reader... Author, do you need a friend to talk about anything or everything that comes in to mind? I know that writing is another method of expression or ideology of an individual. Hope you author, is ok.
I have to admit I am just starting this, however I am unable to put it down. It's a truly fast paced story with hardly any filler and all action. I love that the author is writing from the female lead and male leads point of view. The world that she creates is color and vibrant and the characters reactions and development are well written. While it could definately do with some solid editing it does not leave the reader disappointed.
The story line is wonderful, superb even addictive sometimes but the major problems were grammatically mistakes, spelling mistakes even sometimes emotional expressions are exaggerated. Shouting and crying and yelling expressions are misplaced. Sometimes u cant tell when a scene ends and another begins. But the author is good when it comes to the plot. Even through all this I still managed to read to the end bcos the story was good.
Very well done and quite a compelling story, a few grammar mistakes may pop up but I have spoken with the creator of this masterpiece who will find an editor to correct any mistakes made. Dont let that stop you however from going on a wonderful journey with hours of entertainment with even a sequel available once you have calmed your emotions from this thrilling tale.