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Fragments of Time [FREE/COMPLETED]

Anya_Nesh

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  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background

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Angel0747
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I like this book so much. Plot is original and written so well. This is really so different from all other novels on this site. With every new chapter, you want more. I really admire author for giving this gem. Her writing style is so unique.

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amateur_reader
amateur_readerLv5amateur_reader

This is the most amazing book I have ever come across . The mystery runs sooo deep in this story that u won't believe I have read 345+ chapters and yet there's no clue what actually happened and why . All in all , I can vouch for our dear author that this book is just so amazing that u will regret , if not read .

Makda_Asrat
Makda_AsratLv1Makda_Asrat

This is the best webnovel that I've ever read. The story starts with simple life but at last turned out to be a boom!!! Which has soooooooo much unexpeted turns.

Anya_Nesh
Anya_NeshAuthorAnya_Nesh

Do You Want To Read A Movie? Hello there! The Author is here for a self-review. This is my first work and for me, for the person who is one of the most explicit examples of procrastination, to write 63 chapters so far is definitely a great deal. *congrats to myself* Now, let's go back to the review itself. Writing quality. First of all, I think writing in the language which is clearly not your mother tongue is really hard, and maybe, sometimes, my syntactic constructions can be a little bit strange, but still, they are understandable and grammatically correct. I don't have grammar mistakes (at least, I didn't find any), but the style is just the way it is. This version is my first draft, and I plan to do the editing after I finish the whole book. So take it easy and pay attention to the plot itself. Story development. Like one of the readers said in the comment section - "It feels like I'm watching a movie.....it has all the ingredients of a hit one...." – I do try hard to make the story vivid and emotional. So be ready for the suspense. You will be puzzled with the answer to the question "who is the bad guy?" Character design and world background – As far as I can see, my readers are still waving from one character to another, guessing who is the protagonist and who is the antagonist, who you can trust, and who you shouldn't. It means that I managed to achieve my goal. Can't wait to see how everyone will react when the truth will be revealed and all the masks will be taken off. Stability of updates. To my mind, this point is crucial for translated novels, because they are completed already, and you always can hire more people to handle the translation and update as many chapters as you want (though mass releases are not welcomed by translation teams, because the longer you update, the more readers you attract, which means the more money you get). The same goes for premium original novels. They have a rule for daily updates with 2-3 chapters. As you can see, my novel doesn't belong to any of these two categories. I don't have a strict schedule for updates, but I try to update daily. Because it helps me to keep the process of writing stable, and I'm very happy when new chapters are welcomed by my dear readers. It inspires a lot and gives the energy to write even more. Sometimes, when I cannot update for a day or two (because of some obvious daily life reasons), I try to upload 2 or 3 chapters at once, to compensate for the delay. So I think my stability of updates is pretty good because this novel is not pre-written and you get chapters as soon as they are ready, like hotcakes straight from the oven. This is the main points I wanted to share with you. If you are here, it means you are reading my loooong review, so thank you for your time and attention! I will be glad if you dedicate your time to reading my novel and if it entertains you somehow, it would mean that I did something useful in my life. Thank you for reading and all the best! Take care and may God bless you and your beloved ones. I believe, the family is the most important thing we have in this world. This work wouldn't be the way it is right now without the huge support from my family. Thank you.

Vastenerada
VasteneradaLv12Vastenerada

Nice plot and a lot of mistery, this is a great combination. I enjoy reading this novel a lot, thanks author for your hard work. I have already catched up the last chapter and waiting for your updates. Keep on going, us readers support you.👏👏👏👏👏

janitamendez
janitamendezLv6janitamendez

I am really enjoyed reading this captivating story. I love it from the start until now. Tanks to the author who painstakingly create this interesting story. I'm looking forward for more update .

Amakyerewaa
AmakyerewaaLv13Amakyerewaa

The twist and turns in this story is simply awesome ad I look forward to its update...I only hope the FL and ML would be allowed to develop their relationship ......

amateur_reader
amateur_readerLv5amateur_reader

such a masterpiece this book has been. A well-thought out story woven so beautifully rather mysteriously that up until the end I was clueless as to where the story will go. What turn it will take now !!! Kudos to the author

Amakyerewaa
AmakyerewaaLv13Amakyerewaa

Here is another story that promises to be great, so far it has developed well, am wondering whether Rick will ever change his mind and allow himself the chance to love... But who is this faceless man whom Daniel cannot identify... So much mystery and suspense

JoannaAngel05
JoannaAngel05Lv13JoannaAngel05

An amazing Story is here, everyone kindly give this story a try and leave your good reviews. Thank you author for this amazing story. Thank you, next.

waqasbhatti555
waqasbhatti555Lv5waqasbhatti555

One of my favourite novel.... Just the name of it excites me alot... Sweet and alot of dog food... Aah i can't have enough of it.... I just hope my Dear Author 😘😘😘 keep giving us sweetness.... Thanks for your hardwork... Lots of love for you... ❤❤❤❤ please give us more chapters a day... I am sure other readers are agreed with me right...??? Looking forward to this story.... ❤❤❤❤❤ Wish You Luck...

Lizabelle88
Lizabelle88Lv5Lizabelle88

A touch of Historical mentions in the novel with a hot nerd teacher David Anderson! And black belter in karate Linda. Their story is sweet...slow and addicting build up that the reader would like very much. This will appeal much on ladies. It's an easy read, writing quality is good. Character design is well thought of. A page turner romance novel, a delicious one! I can recommend it to anybody who are looking for novel about love and romance with out excessive violence. Appealing! A delicious read for me! Good job Author.

patitolucas74
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I just want to thank you for sharing with us this master piece for free. You are really awesome dear Author and definitely this story is a great piece of art. I infinitely appreciate it you story and your kind heart!!! 💓

Toriqatullah_Sanni
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This book was extremely amazing,one of the best ive ever read,i cant get enough of it ,prepare to be mind blown😍❤,i love the writer's way of making the story exciting,suspenseful,romantic and adventerous.Infact you will feel a lot of emotions.i just love this book so much

Damienne17
Damienne17Lv12Damienne17

This story has so much depth to it. it is like peeling an onion, layer after layer, to get to the very core of what is really happening. It is so imaginative, and the characters feel so realistic. You end up falling in love with them all, and yes, even the villain.

DaoistKkOJPA
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I love this novel by far the best one in these website from where I got. The writing style is wholesome, the details are at places. It gets interesting by every chapter. I love that we had some spicy, romantic, terrifying, and mixed emotion scenes. The novel mess the mystery tag. I love how David character design and how you fear and like him in the same time. And how's Elena baddass, smart, calm and reasonable. I'm so interested in her dreams. And I advice you all to read it, it's good investment of your time. Once you start you can't stop. Thanks author for writing such a great novel made respect. Stay safe and strong, life a happy and free life with no baffles. And don't care about what people thinks. Tnx for reading this, bye.[img=recommend]

jinu_maria_joseph
jinu_maria_josephLv3jinu_maria_joseph

I just loved this novel. It's almost like a sci-fi movie... Especially there are so many chapters I read and get emotional. This is fav novel🥰🤩⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

JoannaAngel05
JoannaAngel05Lv13JoannaAngel05

Just started reading but already engrossed. I'm loving it so much that I can't get enough, but very happy the story is completed so I can read and stop at any time.

fmclear
fmclearLv6fmclear

Just added this to my library. I'm enjoying this book which is full of mystery so far. Looking forward for more interesting chapters Thanks author for sharing this. 👍

sweeetema
sweeetemaLv5sweeetema

This is a great story so far full of suspense , thrill , schemes and mysteries . This novel is really a good entertainment for readers . So far characters are also designed in a unique way .