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I like the story and wants to read more of it. But unfortunately its already completed and we cannot read another new chapter of it. Although I still think it could be longer and more flesh out, but since its a prequel and there are some more other story as the sequel and they are not completed yet, hopefully they could be expanded and interconnected with each other nicely.
Saw that this story needed one more review to get it's official rating so I read it. The whole thing and I'm giving my honest review currently. I love the story and everything. But there are some problems with the characters in my opinion. They just seem too flat but hey, isn't most of them are. But Other than that this was a good read.
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