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I haven't read much mystery thriller novels on this site, so this definitely stands out to me, even though the trope of being stuck in a time loop has definitely been used before. I enjoy how the writing reflects the MC's thoughts and feelings really well (good close 3rd person POV). My one critique would be that there are several grammar errors concerning tense (ex. switching from "will xxxx" to "xxxx-ed" if that makes sense?), but that's about it. Overall, I'm interested to see how the mystery unravels!
Brilliant novel! It's interesting thriller worth reading, I finished reading all existing chapters to date. Diana is a fighter. Every chapter is a cliff hanger you will be constantly guessing what will happen next. It's very promising! I found some errors though, but once edited properly, this novel will shine like gold! Good job author!