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Well, I saw a two people kissing on the cover and here I amπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ Gotta read this and find out more πππππ Here is 5* for that attractive coverππ
This book kept me up all night! (I'm a slow reader) though I was quite confused at the first few chapters, I must say that this is a well-thought-out book. It's intriguing, there is also a sort of suspense, and sometimes, I find the simple gestured quite cute. The writing flow is smooth. I like how the author narrates her book regardless who's perspective it was. The story progress is surprisingly building up well along with the world building and characters development. 10/10 for me. I am hoping for more chapters :)
This is beautiful.Apart from the starting which i found a little weird,the other parts were good.And also it's as if i'm in this book's world able to see and feel what's going on.I have learnt a lot from this and i sincerely thank you author.give us moreeeee. This book must not be trifled with.Should be carried shoulder high.
Well...the story is indeed very good and I have to admit that I found really enjoyable reading through all the chapters in one go. It was good enough to make read non stop, usually I get tired after reading a few chapters back to back. Only a few Original Stories made few this way, the The Mech Touch is my favorite. My biggest problem with the novel in fact is something that someone had already pointed out, the switching POVs, from third to first, and so on. I'm a writer too and I also switch POVs, but I don't do it when I'm writing the main chapters of my book, this switches only happen in special chapters. The point that o want to make is that switching POVs I think it really breaks the immersion of the reader because of how sudden it happen and abrupt, and just as fast it came, it go away. But in general I had fun reading. My favorite thing about the novel, until now, is the MC. Even though it had been just a few chapters I grew a liking to it. I just hope that the author stay focused and make the MC, and the other characters, grow as the story progress, not just in power, but in mentality as well.
First and foremost, i love how your synopsis is ****** and straight to the point. Good job! I read the first chapter and thought it seems to be written in the first person where we would see only "I". I was wrong. This novel is different and unique. I think this is the first time I've read a novel on Web-novel written in the present tense. Kudos to you author. It did take me a while to really get what was happening because of your writing style. I like the story line. The writing style deserves 5 stars. Happy Reading
Wow, I really love the pace of the story's progression, it keeps me on the edge of my seat and makes me want to know what happens next. Love the character designs and how well you describe Yuliah's thought processes. It helps me sympathize with her, even though I might not think the same way as her. Keep up the good work!
Wow, I did not feel bored while reading, devoured until chapter 14, interesting story! Writing quality is good. Story developments is excellent, clear and well established. Character design, I pity Yuliah, glad she killed his pig husband, Ryas is a mystery, I like to know him more. Will they become a couple? hope so. Amazing novel, engrossing and it's something worth reading. Added on my library.
This is absolutely stunning. I love the writing style and how the story is spread in front of the reader. Weirdly enough, it made me feel like I'm watching a TV show, obviously in a good way. I feel the reason for that is because of the way the characters' background comes to light by conversation, and the story is shown from many eyes. I especially love the character design and the world setting. Keep on writing and never stop!