Reviews of The Insatiable

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Creator of the story here, shamelessly giving my own work five stars. This is the first time that I tried writing a story and letting other people read it so I have no idea whether people would find my work likable. If you do, then I hope you could stick around until till the end and if you don't. Hope you'll give some advice where I should work on. Thanks everyone.

Nice tags 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

BORING STORY. WEAK MC, SLOW MC, CRINGEY WORDS.. HAIZT. ILL JUST DROP THIS SHIT.. WEAK TO STRONG?? THE HELL?? I THNK THIS IS IDIOT TO WEAK.. -.- IT SEEMS I WASTED MY TIME READING THIS SHIT..STORY IS PREDICTABLE AS FUCK!! NO EXCITEMENTS..

good work.....🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇🙆🙆🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇 no problem in the grammar(for me), and the quality is decent. Overall great job author san more chaps pls, we beg you🙇🙇

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Harem, harem, harem, harem, haremharem, harem, harem, haremharem, harem, harem, haremharem, harem, harem, haremharem, harem, harem, haremharem, harem, harem, harem.

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Nice written story, the chapters are quite long, but don’t feel too stretched. I like the idea. Some may call it cliche how the characters are connected, but I think it’s a good way to do it. :)

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It’s an alright story. I am just wondering if you are ever going to write more of it. I’d greatly appreciate it if you could tell me if you are or not.

Great job excellent 👍👍👍👍👍🤗👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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dont make the females fall for the MC very easily and without a fucking reason please. harem is OK but dont make it empty vase without personality!

This is a cool way of seeing things and good story and storyline 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Развитие сюжета, да и сама книга отличная. Апокалипсис, сильный герой и гарем, как в таком романе не может быть его? Надеюсь на то, что глав в книге будет более 100+ Я полностью рассчитываю на фантазию автора. Ну и конечно, качество письма, оно сдесь очень хорошее. И автору хотелось бы пожелать удачи в написание, и завершение книги, а так же побольше подобных книг.

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Pretty good so far. Hope it stays that way. :) ..................................................................................................................

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