Comments of chapter undefined of The Forgotten Princess

Very captivating introduction. It's promising.

i love this one 😊 added on my library. thankyouu author 😘

I even tried to describe the feeling of when we like to read something so much, but as many already know, it is beyond description.

A little cliche so far. But that's not surprising considering the site it's on and the fact it's for a contest. Hopefully this girl surprises us and isn't the typical Mary Sue and that her siblings are actual humans and not the typical 2d "bad guys" who bully this girl for no reason and only exist to be hated by the readers. Won't lie. I don't really feel like continuing it since the first chapter doesn't give me much to anticipate but I hate not finishing things and the attempt at first person is interesting. I just hope this will be a good time waster. Sorry if that sounded mean or rude. Just an opinion. Everyone has different tastes and that's cool. Plus it's just the first chapter. The rest could be really good for all I know. Btw, I think the artist of your cover is Wlop. I suggest getting their permission to use their art just because that's what nice human beings do. If you don't wanna, it's fine. Just thought I'd let you know who made it. Ghostblade is pretty cool~

Young princess to be presented to social public....

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I liked the beginning although I felt sad for our protagonist 😞😢

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Very nice introduction. Background has been covered and the story can begin.

Great stOry

Great.... Interesting Good start....

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A bit emotional at first about her mother life😔 and then life goes on she grew up hardly suffering being bully... I like the first chapter[img=recommend]

it's nice

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l love this story

I love this one

nice