Hey pps,
I just wanted to say a few things that has been bothering me. the first thing would be the review that was put on my story, I'm not going to say that person is wrong or arguing with it want it is just an opinion, so I'm not going to say a opinion isn't true.
But it still kind of hurt, the reason being that the MC is based around myself and the events that happened in my life. Although I do want critique because that helps the story grow, that's not going to change the fact it pained me.
And the other sad news is, although I tried one chap a day and around 1500 words it is really difficult for me, my mind is on the story 24/7, and my dad keeps telling me it isn't healthy to live like that and I can't keep pushing myself like that.
Now you maybe think this is over the top and I'm overreacting, but it doesn't change the situation. The quality of the story is important to me and the same with the RR, as for that I'm sorry because I'm still trying to balance it all, I got too overexcited that people saw potential in my story and wanted to meet expectations and go above that.
That was it for the rant part now the explanation.
Right now is the building stage for the world, magic, characters and their relations, I always found that the bad guys were too One-Dimensional and I try too change that. Maybe people think the MC is a goody 2 shoes but I wanted to say that we only actively interacted with his family, and if you look some things up you can find that the Malfoy family have a really close band as Narsicca, the mother even lied to Voldemort because she wanted the best for her family in the series. Also I did put hints that his father still deals with 'shady people' in the story. And i hope people realize the MC is just 6 years old right know. there isn't much he can do except read, exercise and potion-brewing (will come later).
Now what is probably one of the most Important part for you readers is, right now I'm going to seriously slow my pace and post only when I am happy with what I've written. Maybe you guys noticed but after I post a chapter I reread it and correct all the mistakes for a smoother read.
The short version: I'm happy people read my story as i feel like a reader myself. It's going to be Quality over Quantity. And I hope you guys stay with me and the MC on this jouney.