Comments of chapter undefined of Gamer in Harry Potter

ok,I don't care if English is not your first language, u use a translator and should proofread read. anyone that knows hp knows dumbles is not a principal and that the head of houses are not called deans. this is the little stuff that makes it seem like you don't care enough about the story to even proofread, if you can't proofread why should anyone read this. might sound harsh but there are a string of stories like this lately and its annoying. just proofread, anyone that knows hp knows those mistake are just stupid to make and shows you are lazy.