VCris
I love this story! It's unique in its own way as the protagonist is like the ones from Japanese novels(the status screens), but also like the ones in Chinese novels(where they reincarnate or transform into animals). The author's writing style is to the point and the only thing I'd request of them is to look over her spelling once in a while! 😂 But besides that, the plot's at a nice pace and the different point of views are a plus to the whole story! Dear author, thank you for putting up your story online! I know it's kind of scary at first since you think you'll be judged or scorned by the readers, (well, at least I was) but you're doing a great job! And I'm saying this as a fellow BL author! Keep up the good work!
There's a few misspellings, but they don't hinder the reading. The MC is funny, interesting, and lovely. I particularly love the dumb brother - is just too cute and I want to pet him all the time. The mindset of the characters evolves along the story, and the world is also interesting and well portrayed. Overall, it's a good read and I recommend it (if you love BL of course!)(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
I wish yuri was as great a yaoi with such great numbers and actually great stories and not some softcore harem ****, with the few Exceptions usually being Amateur Writing and the few great gems.......... WHAT’S SO GREAT ABOUT SWORD FIGHTS.......... The story is great so far...... even if i dislike BL, they have more “consistent” good stories, it’s a lot harder to find good stories among all that harem trash
Ok I like the idea of it a little, I don't like it being bl sorry, but not the rest of the title that said it was did not show, it's good for others and I don't hate it, it's just I don't read or really get into bl story's I liked everything before dungeon and then it left sour taste in my mouth I just into it. I got to ch. 37 good day and good life. ** I have nothing against bl just don't like reading it
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