This story really draws the reader in with it's balanced plot and character development. Li Xiaolu is a solid heroine with the nice mix of strength and softness. The hero, Zhang Zeahan is strong, gentle and together they have the right amount of physical appeal. The author did not forget the villains readers love to hate - which include a scumbag family, a super crappy boyfriend (for the herione) and equally attractive competitor for the hero.
Biggest drawback for the story is the LACK OF PROOFREADING. Serious editing is needed before publishing. Though the storytelling is good, the lack of editing will hold this story back some. It is not the readers responsiblity to try to figure out what the author wants to convey in their writing. So, PROOFREADING for correct spelling, work tense, etc is necessary.
For those those out there who will say "don't read this story if you don't like it", this is not the case. In my opinion, this is a darn good story that remind me of others I have come across on this app and like this story, I (and other readers) pay money for the privilege to read it. So, a little editing will help.
