Reviews of The Assassin & The Alpha

This is a really great story, especially for People who like romance or/and fantasy just like me it’s also fun for those who are adventurous and like (rather mild) action.

The author has a good contrast of romance and fantasy but chapter are a little too short in the beginning and sentences are a too long. But as the story as over 50 chapters first problem is met as for second we will see

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The book is awesome. The characters, their background, their nature, everything is described beautifully. Only problem is the irregular flow of words and unpoilshed grammar. If author can improve it, this book will be without a doubt more popular. Well, that problem is only applicable for the first few chapters. Later, the quality increases. Thank u for the book author. Waiting for more.

I really like the romance between the main duo and the whole assassin family plot. But, the grammar and quick pov switches throws me off occasionally. The chapters are quite short, so it's somewhat easy to read. I like the style of writing and the ideas involved. Keep it up author! >3</

Overall, I feel that the story is pretty good as theres plenty in terms of character development , plot advancement and information buildup. One thing that strikes me is that there has not been much action in terms of fights , showcasing of abilities and brawls as i’m a person more inclined to action and fighting novels . However, as the story has only just started and there has not been much chapters yet that is only understandable and with how the story has been progressing, i hope and also assume that the author has many mysteries regarding the various bloodlines and past relating to the characters and MC’s of the story and i look forward to finding out and reading more of this book. I’ve come to the end of my review but all in all, kudos to the author for delivering us daily chapters of such good quality. (Review done as of Chapter 50)

The story is interesting, the change of POV is perfect, with certainty this change of perspective was brilliant for this story, but while I read it I noticed that you create a text wall, and this kind of thing is a little bored, except this the story is 10/10.