14 Critics

The Beach Awards 2018

Reviewed by, MissMaven

Publisher: Wattpad

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation: 8/10

Cover: 4/5

Originality: 5/5

Character Development: 10/10

Plot Development: 8/10

Description: 3/5

Enjoyment: 5/5

Total: 43/50

Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation: "There were a few punctuation mistakes, but this story honestly can't be confined by normal punctuation since it's a story told poetically. Overall, I always knew what the author was saying and nothing stood out as greatly flawed."

Cover: "The cover is delicate and beautiful just like the story, so I felt like it was perfect. The title is a little off but not completely inaccurate, so I just took off one point."

Originality: "This story was absolutely original. As soon as I started it, I didn't put it down until I was finished with the entire thing. Not only is the format original, the plot is too. Also, the blurb for this story was 100% accurate."

Character Development: "You watch this main character undergo a complete transformation in this book in as few words as possible. It's fantastic. The development is both physical and mental, and it's very beautifully done."

Plot Development: "This story's plot is unique in that several parts are meant to be assumed and not explained. There was obviously plot progression that aided the story, but it was not exactly obvious. This was on purpose, but I did dock a few points because it could be seen as confusing for some. I personally had to ask the author some questions at the end to clarify."

Blurb/Description: "It's 100% accurate to the story and really prepared me for what I was about to read."

Enjoyment: "I loved reading this book. Every chapter was pure enjoyment, and I highly recommend this book to everyone looking for an airy light hearted read. It's incredibly creative and beautifully written."