Reviews of Taking Over Yue Zhong's Body In GDW

Starts off alright with the MC traveling through those 9 worlds really quickly just *coincidently* appearing near all the MC's of the respective story. The character of the MC is weird af however, he takes all the good fortune from the original MC's from those 9 worlds, then "helps" then because he has a guilty conscious...... WTF? After a while, this story just goes downhill. The only way to describe it would be: CRINGEEEEEEEEEEE On the other hand, if you are fine with a sub-par power tripping novel which will induce a cringe in every paragraph, then give it a go. P.S. I came because I like the power-trip, OP and harem tags of the story, but the execution was tooooooo cringe.

Pls keep all the girls he had in the original novel........ ............................................................................................................

Hey hey bang author fancy to meet indonesian writer here wkwk I like your story tho, its original and I think it's have a very big potential. Take care bang author and enjoy your process writing this novel Semangat!!! Hehe

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Aku gk tahan namanya Asep, sumpah kalo bisa dikasih nama cikrak ato apalah. Kupikir ini novel romance, ternyata hentai gore parah.++!++++++++++++++++++++++++++aku gk tau kenapa penulis dari indo mengarah story kayak gini+++++ aku kasih sesuai kenyataan yah

Wow this is sad look i dont care im neutral continue... drop it it dosnt matter there will be more fanfictions and just as many dropped. Surpisingly even though I enjoyed your story i must say you have fallen in my eyes but what do u care about us readers. So if u wanna write then write if u wana drop then drop just plz stop with the *****ing. Write a chapter saying your continuing or dropping no need for two chapters of you complaining. Still thank you for writing a good fanfic shame that if you decide to drop it would leave a bad taste. I say you owe it to your self not us to continue but hey an advisor can advise a king but it is the king that will have to ultimately decide

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This novel is awsome i have already readen GDW plss make the H-scene awsome too XD just joking i think it will be intresting if he Travel in Nation Phillipines bro!! im from ph btw haha goodluck for writting this novel 😀😀😀

I see Morvian, Automatic 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 😎😎😎 Dammit, i hate 140

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I just read the glossary and what I’ve seen sounds like a total shît show.so the man reincarnated a bunch of times yet somehow he is able to bring people and heavenly treasures with him? And what the hell will he do with a 100+ uchiha eyes? Dafug bruh. Literally the fücker is way too OP and has way too many advantages for this story to be good. This is just my rant but y’all know that what I’m saying is FACT

Morvian make him back to indonesia after chinese, even if he is yue zong now, he is still asep inside, at least make a base in indonesia, and you know indonesia is the best place for leveling because there is so muct forest and beach.

Wow one more cool work of yours like harem palace sect .....it's good keep the flow of chapters coming thanks bro I hope it's fun and more Need more need more need more ....and more

I like this novel. the story is very good. both from the plot and the character Did they have ***? . I am waiting for the MC to make the kingdom and if possible make the plot unpredictable

Trash forgot Eggy and Xue Ji, Jasmine, our story would be fucking if you did not forget the waifu **** 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎 I never want to see if you litter in my front

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just dont drop this work, still a great work from this author😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗 😙😙 ...,................. 😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝🙆🙆

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Good novel don't drop it please..................................................... ..............................................................................................

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