vicky111mudi
Total **** show, nothing makes sense, his powers are retarded, the characters make the **** show even worse while mc is plain stupid Author tries to make it funny at some points but it comes out forced and cringeworthy instead Overall wouldn't read this even if I was bored out of my mind and nothing else to read cause it is nothing but trash
Not bad. But it's SO BAAADDDD!!! JshshshsbsbsbsbsbbzbsbsbsbshshshzπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππβΊπβΊπβΊπβΊπππβΊπβΊπβΊππβΊπβΊπβΊπβΊπβΊπβΊπβΊπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππβΊπππππππππππππππ€βΊπ€π€βΊπ€βΊπβΊππβΊπππ€ππ€ππ
I gave this a try cause I wanted to read One Piece stuff, but yah the ratings were true. The story is a little hard to follow along, but mostly the writing style and grammer are pretty awful, unless you are not English first born (first language) than I understsnd why its like this, but if you are than god...
the beginning story already good ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ»ππ» plssss release more chapter really fast and donβt DROPPED!!! all one piece novel i already read the story already good then dropped..then new novel one piece release same story same beginning different characters mc..then dropped...just go die already donβt ever write novel if you just want too dropped when you just copy paste the story and you just put your mc character but the story still same likes the real one piece storyπππ
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The MC was useless, so many drama, bad grammar, op skill but idiot MC. Defeated by some weakling Navy in his fight right away, while luffy defeated some with his rubber gum while using his pistol punch. op cheat of space ability and etc vs rubber? Ofcourse op cheat will win f*ck but the mc was a dumb while he can hold his feeling for many years he become idiot cause of some conversation of mob pirates and also because he gain some skill. Haizt Conclusion : Do not read it!
ΠΡΠ΅Π½Ρ ΠΆΠ°Π»Ρ ΡΡΠΎ ΡΠ°Π½ΡΠΈΠΊ Π²ΠΎΡ ΡΠ°ΠΊ Π²ΠΎΡ Π±ΡΠΎΡΠΈΠ»ΠΈ ΠΌΠ½Π΅ ΠΎΠ½ ΠΎΡΠ΅Π½Ρ ΠΏΠΎΠ½ΡΠ°Π²ΠΈΠ»ΡΡ , ΠΎΡΠ΅Π½Ρ ΡΠΌΠ΅ΡΠ½ΠΎΠΉ ΠΈ ΠΈΠ½ΡΠ΅ΡΠ΅ΡΠ½ΡΠΉ Ρ ΠΎΡΡ ΠΌΠ΅ΡΡΠ°ΠΌΠΈ ΠΆΡΡΡ ΠΊΠ°ΠΊΠΎΠΉ Π±Π°Π½Π°Π»ΡΠ½ΡΠΉ , ΡΠ°ΠΊ ΡΡΠΎ Π°Π²ΡΠΎΡ Ρ Π½Π°Π΄Π΅ΡΡΡ Π½Π° ΡΠ²ΠΎΡ ΡΠΊΠΎΡΠΎΠ΅ Π²ΠΎΠ·Π²ΡΠ°ΡΠ΅Π½ΠΈΠ΅