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Ex-Divine Master in Animeverse

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SleepDeprivation
SleepDeprivationLv5SleepDeprivation

I like this. I've no reason why I just do. No onto the many, many, many negatives. 1) I don't like harem 2) So the main character is Yun Che from Against the Gods, no big deal. What is a big plot hole is the fact that our MC supposedly has the same exact story and yet ours is super edgy and lacks "female contact" while in ATG, Yun Che is the fucking harem king, this makes no sense to me. 3) I'm not against using the MC of different novels but in this case, the author really ****ed up. The MC we have here has grown up without any type of parental love, any sort of love really and yet fucking Yun Che if I remember correctly has like 4 parents, a **** ton of grandparents, and like a different goddess from every single region who all likes him. TBH the author probs chose ATG because of the power system/cool names. 4)Going to different anime worlds? Cool. But the author doesn't introduce anything new to the worlds he goes to. It's basically just wish fulfillment, the author literally inserts himself into the MC. Let me give an example, the first anime world he goes into is ifinite stratos, and the MC basically steals the harem members from the MC of that anime world and yet is like 1000 times stronger/capable/better in every way. What's more, this doesn't even fit into the MC's character traits. "Hmmm? Some girl I just destroyed in a match yesterday is asking me to be my girlfriend, right in front of my current girlfriend? AND not to mention the fact that my current way just gave away permission just like that since they both drew in a match against each other? Sure why not." 5) Now some may say that it's hard to flesh out an anime world without breaking a few concepts but in this case the author doesn't even need to do much for example I can literally **** out ideas for Infinite stratos, make like a whole arc about how the new tech machine armor thingy can be used in war and the impact it has on current warfare as well as the patriarchy (prodominantly male rule) of society. Would love to see some try to do some research on why the MC is able to use the machines to be able to reverse the changes / get a bigger army with more reserves. 7) Just bad English, some words misspelled, some others just used wrong, some in the wrong tense. Okay that's probably it. Maybe. Either way I know nothing is going to change, the author wants to write what he wants to write and there's nothing wrong with that, I just want to let some of y'all know what you're getting into. 10/10 would review again

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RobbedOfRackades
RobbedOfRackadesLv4RobbedOfRackades

This is just a warning to future readers: Don't have high expectations just because its in the top 15. I usually don't write bad reviews to not discourage authors, but I just have to because this is in the top 15 (when honestly it shouldn't be, in my opinion) the story is shaky/all over the place, the characters are ****ty as hell, they are literally worse than 2D (meaning they have no depth to them whatsoever and are just there to serve as a wallpaper for the story). The whole story doesn't make any sense and I think it's a good idea it's just written terribly. The terrible part isn't even the English (I've read worse), its the plot. Author if you read this: I hope you know this is just my opinion and I hope you keep writing your story because obviously a lot of people like it.

TioLu
TioLuLv4TioLu

The Novels that I completely compliment are, altogether, less than 10. Your novel should be on this list, Author. The idea and development of the story are very good. Thanks for this, reading novels after a boring day is wonderful, especially when the story is as good as yours!!!

FalgaGS
FalgaGSLv13FalgaGS

For the STUCK UP GOD!!!!!! Give the f@#ker some stones. oM.kmkffkjfkfnfnflflfjfofk Df F F Ffkflrl Fkflfff Djdnmdmdd.mdmdd F F Ff F F For9rirjrjrorororklrlrrorjjrbrndkf Fjfkrlrorlrlorrorormrmrsms

Kazutoxin
KazutoxinLv15Kazutoxin

Creator you have to put h-scene in this novel Because therme a Harem and de don't want to See something like Highschool DxD the Anime and manga

ElionAVL
ElionAVLLv6ElionAVL

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General_Paragon
General_ParagonAuthorGeneral_Paragon

This is a rewrite of the previous version. What changed? The first chapter is much better than before, and this time it also has more sense. Because the novel of Against the Gods is quite further past the previous time I read it to make this fanfic, now I am using more precise data to write this. The grammar is muuuuuch greater than before, and I will do my best to not make it cringy. Confirmed crossovers with: 1) Konosuba (The order might be different) ?) Infinite Stratos ?) Seraph of the End ?) Shimoneta ?) Akame ga kill Last) Against the Gods(Original Universe) Possible crossovers with: ?) Monster Girl Quest ?) Blade Dance ?) Chivalry of the Failed Knight ?) Seven Deadly Sins ?) Bleach ?) More... Impossible crossover with: Dragon Ball Naruto (Especially this) One Piece Overlord Boku no pico Asterisk war Possibly more... If you know a verse with a great variety of power levels, you can suggest it. If you wish, you can also recommend something you would like to see in the fanfiction, depending on your decision, I will take it in consideration.

X12345
X12345Lv5X12345

He should have continued this novel but still one of the best novels i read and am thankfull to the author for writing such a great novel hhhhhhhh

Vyte
VyteLv11Vyte

Couldn't read past the second chapter due to horrible writing quality. Almost no capitalization in some areas, numerous typos, weird grammar and wording in most sentences. Get an editor or go back and fix all your chapters and I'll come back and continue reading and update my review

The_Monster999
The_Monster999Lv14The_Monster999

Dear Author, I would like to say thank you for the novel and the hard work you put in and thank you for making the MC a fearless badass! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

SleepyNoodles
SleepyNoodlesLv5SleepyNoodles

Man this is good. Imagine the roller coaster of emotions he's having. And by every ending it just pains me knowing how powerless you are when you can't stop your love ones from dying right in front of your eyes even with the amount strength you have. I know that he cries a lot for a guy that lived for a long time but you have to remember that he close off his emotions since a long time and he's now opening his heart. Feeling what it means to live a meaningful life with your love ones.

Stronda
StrondaLv5Stronda

Please don't................ drop........................ this.............................. Fan-Fic...................... ............................................. .................................. ........................................ ...............................

AdrianLopez
AdrianLopezLv5AdrianLopez

Love the concept of the story and that it is nit one of those system fanficts hipe this obe keep going on for a long time hope next chapter is soon recommend people to read story its great

Viibration
ViibrationLv5Viibration

All 5 for kono dio da (ch 74) πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Pool
PoolLv4Pool

I believe this is one of the best novels. I've read in the whole of web novel yet it's an overall 4 because I believe it was one of the best novels ever

Rukimedsu
RukimedsuLv4Rukimedsu

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CharleyHerrera
CharleyHerreraLv4CharleyHerrera

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Daoist314597
Daoist314597Lv2Daoist314597

HEY MAN TY FOR THIS FAN FIC I REALLY LIKE THIS I NEED MORE CHAPTERS KEEP UP THE EPIC WORK CUZ THIS IS GOOD SHT AND IM HAVING A LOT OF FUN AND GOOD VIBES

AzureYuhao
AzureYuhaoLv2AzureYuhao

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Maurz
MaurzLv4Maurz

Great if you like OP mc fanfictions especially with cocky mc. Fun read. .....................................................................