My One And Only

I just read the story a few hours ago and is thriller me with the characters persona and their fluffy romance and hope this story will not dropped and wish the best story Author🙌🙌

The story is quiet refreshing. Even though I've read little but the story build up is nice. There are few things that I'd like to point out. The both main characters are similar instead of different as stated. I feel that the chapters are short. Ig you're going with 500 words a chapter? There are some parts that are hard to follow through due to a rapid introduction of characters. But overall, well done.

In general, a solid story, engaging twists and developments. However, in the beginning, I had a great deal of keeping track of which sister and which brother was which, since you have siblings on both sides with the same first letter in their names, Susan and Sofya, Arnav and Advay. It took a while to explain the past histories, so I wasn't as engaged then either. About 20 chapters in, things really seemed to pick up and come together.

I like where the story is going. The author knows what she is doing. It is a good novel that I would definitely suggest to others :D I just have some comments that might help in improving the future chapters. I am also prone to these, and it's really important that you are aware of them, too. First, I suggest you redefine who you are talking about when writing new paragraphs. As authors, when we say "he" or "she," most of the time, we already know who we are referring to. But when it comes to the readers, they might get lost. They would then ask them selves who was currently speaking or who the story was talking about. Then, they would read it again and again until they understand. That would immediately cut off the reader's immersion to the story. It's okay to repeat the names of who you are referring to, but don't make it too frequent that it gets annoying. Second, I think you need to get rid of the spaces inside the quotation marks. I am quite sure that it is not the right practice, and, as an author, you should practice the right standards as early as possible lest you get too attached to the wrong ones. By then, it becomes a habit that would be difficult to get rid of. Third, I think you need to elaborate a character's standing by they way he or she interacts or speaks. For example, it bothers me that a personage, such as Sofya, calls someone bro-in-law. Shouldn't it be brother-in-law? Four letters could make a whole lot of difference when it comes to the tone. The former sounds more casual and slang while the latter is more formal. Do take the effort to make her sentences formal, because that is how a person like her is expected to speak. Again, I am also prone to these errors. I just think it's best for me to tell you about the bad things I noticed in myself, so we could fix them together. Overall, it is a novel that is worth reading. Good luck to you, author!

I like the synopsis, and will going to add it in the library, I only read till chapter 3 because kind of busy but I can already tell that this is a good one. A good past time when bored. The grammar is good, job well done author (｡･ω･｡)

The writing quality is good, just a couple grammar glitches here and there, the stability of updates deserves the five stars given how often the author churns them out but then again, the chapters are extremely short... Story development is good. Character design is fair, so far, they fit into the social elite stereotype that many novels of this kind have. But what I loved was that the female lead isn't a dependent spineless sap but instead a powerful woman who takes **** from no one. World background is well described, but it only focuses on the elites so far. Overall, a good story with short chapters to blitz through and a powerful female lead that deviates from the usual stereotype of how females are in these kind of novels.

Hi author! The story is great. I love how strong and tough the female character is. Actually, I both love the two leads. Keep up the good work. Looking for more chapters😊

Your novel is good and well written. Keep up the good work! I couldn't read all 64 chapters but so far so good! The chapters are shorter but more chapters make up for it.

The chapters are short, but you could consider the length to be unique to the story. There are a couple of grammar errors or typos here and there, but they don't distract from the story. As a romance novel, it certainly is nice compared to others. And, a strong female lead is a plus. Well, keep it up. I'm looking forward to more updates. >3</

Great romance! I like how the Female protagonist has her own strong persona without being a weak-need-man type of character, the world background is good as well. My only complain is the length of the chapters; It looked like small scenes not an actual chapter but other than that it's indeed a great story that I totally recommend.

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Amazing story Author.Best Romantic fiction I have read.😍 Writing skills are excellent and the story development is good. I enjoyed your book a lot 5 stars for you hehe. My best regards to you.😄

Awesome story, m'lady!! Absolutely awesome!!! Keep going on!!! Yeehaw!! Btw, the chaps r too short but that is what romance is. Short and Sweet!! Keep up the good work!! Bot signing out😋

Ah~love this story. The chapters are short and sweet. Well sometimes not so sweet but u get the idea. The romance is well written and the writing style is awesome. I don't criticise much, so I'll end it here. To be honest, I didn't find anything to criticise. There were only some grammatical errors. Otherwise this book is pretty moe🌼🌼 for me

I am not the best fan of romance fiction. Your story is good. I didn't see any errors and so on. My only problem while reading is the chapters are too short. I hate short chapters more than waiting for long chapters. When I am in the mood to read romance fiction I will continue reading. Good Luck!

The writing quality is really great! The chapters are much shorter than I'm used to, but if it allows you to have daily updates, then I see why you made that choice. I only read a few chapters so far, but I'm already interested in learning about what the ML's past trauma is. Also wondering why the FL is not as friendly to the ML in the beginning as she is to his bro. Is the meeting in the first chapter not their first time meeting? Or did they meet before and have a bad first impression?

the over all story is good. few starting chapters are short but they are normal later on. good story development. only need little touch in side characters. suspense is real, i didn't stop until i read half of it in one go. must read.

Hm very short chapters. And I was actually depressed that you have written so many chapters in such a short time. Anyway interesting. Would sure check in future if not busy with my novel.

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I wonder what happened to his past love.. It must be very happy and painful experience fir Arnav since Sofya reminds him of her... When will the two of you start a formal relationship? I think Sofya could be a good wife to him since it appears she's really caring yet is not likely accept being lied to.