Comments of chapter undefined of The Hitting Zone

I hated that bastard Uncle from the beginning...I don't know whose worse off Jake or his Brother. What a complete mess...

take a rest, health is number one.

Im surprised that i didnt see this coming, the forshadowing was there but like i did think his uncle’s financial problem was going to come up. I just thought it was going to be something stupid about some weird investment or he bought a yacht or something. im pleasantly surprised and now very interested since Jake’s backstory definitely had some holes in it. Idk what specifically but it just smelled fishy. keep up the good work!!!

really hope the uncle goess go jail for something

Thanks for the chapter IT is good Jeremy doesn‘t know, im really sorry for him that he has such human(i would like to call his uncle worse but i dont Think there is anything in this univers to compare) at his uncle🤬 There are sooo many questions, i can‘t wait for the next chapter I don‘t think there will be an answer from his uncle that i will like, i don‘t belive he has a good reason because i think there is no reason to let a child live with that mother, regardless of wether That child is family or not. I hope that his uncle is the only person who know of the money and not more from Jeremys family. I hope Jack and Jeremy won‘t break over this, that would be really horrible. And I hope Jeremy will see how good the Atkins are, i believe they wouldn’t say thinks like „ i said it. I really love this story i can‘t get enough 😘😘😘

thanks for the chapter coach... I am looking forward to this unfolding

Thanks for the extra effort coach! At least we know now Jeremy wasnt involved in it

holy.. .. .. .. SHIT

Thanks for the chapter!

I forgot to throw a prayer of hope that author would put up another chapter tonight 🙏🙏🙏🙏

Thanks for the chapter

coach!!!!! this cliff is too big!!!! but also the ~drama~. so good very exciting keep it up

would a crook admit it, esp to his target/victim?

Thanks for the chapter! Sorry for my intensity last night.😖😅

man uncles get such bad rep

Get well Coach!

Thanks

I hope you feel better soon. Your story brings so much joy ☺️