Good story, but each chapter is little more than a single paragraph, by the time chapter 100 is reached there will be enough content for 5 chapters of reasonable length.
Thanks for the story. Don't drop, but perhaps turn it into a novel?
Become a KOL for my discussion channel!
Engage with others on the app, and become a moderator for my discussion channel. Let this be a place for sharing with other fellow bookworms!