Bibliophile_Anna
Oh, not bad! 5 star for everything except stability of updates. I won't read romance so I won't be continuing, but you write well. Good work and don't worry about criticising yourself too much. From your other reviewers, one point to grow may be how chapter 1 moves. Try to catch people early so they won't say "Started slow".
I'll give 5 for now. 'Tis indeed a promising story for RF. Interesting plot, characters are defined well, the writing quality is exquisite, grammar is correct. Thoughts are organized well and the flow of the story is fast which is good thing. I am only looking forward to the stability of updates. Never give up on something you've started. Great job!
Ohhhh i really love this story😍😍😍😍i cant stopped reading it pls pls update soo . Kudos much to you my dear author i love the way the love story of our lead role was written the romantic side of the lead actor was superv love the lovey dovey things theyre doing But im afraid of that old pervent ugly man i dont like him here.
Although I am not a fan of this kind, I have read 3 chapters where I have seen flaws here and there, such as the use of the past tense and present, "she acts" when she has always acted or she has acted, use of the translator. Before I had done a novel with 10 chapters drills and realized that the problem was the google translator. And what I did to improve was ... Shorter paragraphs and when editing, check 3 times, or, in some cases, open another page of the translator and correct that specific word. Anyway, my rating is 5 because we beginners authors have to be encouraged and improved with training when writing, writing and writing ... Overall, I found your novel interesting and over time, it sure will get better and better with its due practice, just do not give up or get discouraged! Good luck!
I was scrolling down and noticed this one. At first the story's development was kinda slow but as i went along the next chapters things seemed to be doing well. I hope was not a fan of romance fiction coz its kinda cliche and repetitive tru times, but i was surprised to see the plot quite interesting.. Plus knowing its a first novel of yours its promising. Great job! I just hope the update is consistent. ✔👍
I will become the greatest Artist in China! That's just amazing. I won't say anything else, but the story is fine. Before this, I was thinking about scrolling past and see what can I get, but hey, that's more than my expectation! It was a great story about life, and of course, it's addicting. Please continue with the story, and I'm hereby complaining your story is too short. Triple release each day, please!
I will say, for a non native speaker of English; well done. A few typos here and there, but nothing that can't be fixed. Its very fast pace; years sometimes traverse between chapters, but it works for this novel as we needed to get to her ***** ages. Another point is that the mother's emotionless stare whenever the MC sings or dances; a mother's eyes are a dangerous weapon. I recommend reading this, it's rather short but that's part of the charm. I hope the Author continues to update this, as I would enjoy reading the rest of this MC's story.
This book is Really such a big rollercoaster but has such a unique interactions and one of the most amazing stories i have read with all the ups downs and main characters are just great, to be honest im so invested in this story i love it dearly and i’m so happy the chapters are not locked it makes it so much easier to read and more enjoyable, It is also written So WELL thank You author i hope you carry on Honestly Deserves 5 stars
still at chapter 74 but I can say that it's a pretty neat romance novel, i just feel sad not to know her struggle during her university year bcoz of the time skip, im thinking how goos it wud be if author let readers see how she became asias multi talented queen, aside from the time skip, i love the romance and the suspense grips me hard, all in all, i love this just pls update more, with dat u can be sure dat readers continue to support this, good job!