Comments of chapter undefined of Skyrim: Faal Thur

Skyrim: Faal Thur

Mr_McGuffin

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Loyal_HunterLv4Loyal_Hunter

I don't like the MC anymore, when he turned from a cowardly office worker to a cold and confident fighter it was pretty good but now he's a complete asshole. All she said was 'Well we should probably get going' and then this ****er thinks he has to put her in her place by saying 'you're just my shadow'. This has gotten boring, he calls her his companion and then pulls this **** off, there's a difference between MC becoming a bit evil and cold and straight up being a prick even to his team.

4yr

Loyal_HunterLv4Loyal_Hunter

I replied to wrong comment. Yea, he's already starting to get drunk on power in this chapter.

Havoc76:The MC needs a goal otherwise he's just going to get drunk on power and grow complacent.

3yr

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DarcksageLv11Darcksage

STOP RIGHT THERE CRIMINAL SCUM!

4yr

Mr_McGuffinAuthorMr_McGuffin

There will be no chapter tomorrow. I'm seeing some quality drops when I write, so I will take a break and try and work through it. Thanks

4yr

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TitanicLichChickenLv11TitanicLichChicken

I love the story, but the thought of two fully armored people on one horse is a little hard to believ if they are going distance. You could have made him make a one-horse chariot to carry more weight. :)

2yr

MastersgtJamesLv10MastersgtJames

pretty bummed MC does not have a set of daggers and his own bow. Shoulda also hooked Erin up with more weapons.

4yr

Snake551gLv12Snake551g

Cool sotry but the mc is a real prick he woudlnt even be half as power without all the help and he is only a strong guy alone hope he grows up or well simply dies and that's it

4yr