Reinesse
Only five chapters, but man am I hooked. Liwei is just... Amazing. Never seen a character like hers. This book is definitely different from others I've read. Few minor typos but they can be fixed. I can only hope for more chapters. Only problem is that there are a lot of names, and I had to go back to see who was who.
The story seems good and so far there doesn't seem to be any significant grammatical errors. The plot and characters are really interesting but it seems that the author's update rate isn't realiable so I have to go through agonizing seconds because of the lack of chapters, otherwise its good...šš