Warning for Reviews

Sorry guys, not an update, but it still might be fun to check out?

So, I went on to my novel reviews to check out and like reviews of the oh-so-lovely-readers(you all) and then find a pretty weird review.

At first, I was kinda like: Meh.

But then, I realized that a lovely reader had stood up for me(kudos to you RuYui! Thanks so much! Loved your novel btw!)

So I got a little bit rash and angry... who am I lying to, I got really angry.

I kinda bashed him or her over there. Just wanted to show you guys what it was like.

kyki

Reading Status: C4 1 week ago

It's written by a kid. A very little stupid kid. He / she copied every web novel tag she/he saw around into just one paragraph. He / she doesn't have any idea on money, actually he / she has no idea about anything at all. Total waste of time. So, the question is; why are guys praising it? Either you are also some no iq kids or you guys are pedophiles trying get into contact with writer and make her / him open cam...

(Eek! So many grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes! *shivers from the horror of it all*)

RuYui

I know everyone has a right of speech especially in literacy but can't you keep it to the story?

Yeah, it may be written by a kid but you have no right to judge that person's character nor can you call the readers idiot.

Copied or not, it is still based on how the writer will be able to flow the story and in my opinion the author did a decent job.

Besides every story starts from copying or at least have a referral so if you would be so kind, if you even have a bit kindnesses in you, don't bash a story so rashly.

Also, can you even compile a story and make it into something like this? If not then you are making yourself the biggest idiot here

(What an exemplary lovely reader! *admiring gaze* My hero!)

kyki

And here is another idiot. What you are stupiditly declaring that; if you are not ruling a nation, you have no right to call Trump supporters as the idiot boot lickers as they are. If you are not cooking, you can't dump the disgusting weeks old rotten pile of dish that's been put in front of you into trash. I would say that's a new low, but it would be a lie. World is full with dumb trash like you. If you had zero ounce of iq, you would be irritated to be misguided to this kind of kid blabbering being showered with highest ratings. Obviously, that would require a level of personal thinking capability, only possible if you are in possession of intelligence. Frankly, you do not have it. Another thing is very clear about you. You fucking have no clue about writing if you are happy to read a little kids delusional spoiled bratty whinings served as a story. Now I only have one advice to you; shove your arrogant illiteracy up your ass.

(This is where I got mad.)

And now for my reply!

thisworldofmine1

I just want to ask, how far did you read up to? And have you tried writing yourself? Do you know how much it took for me to publish BL in the first place? And to try to write it in the first place?

I really don't appreciate your comment here and let me tell you something Mr. or Ms., the world isn't so great, but at least there are some people who've set their mind to improve it.

Sure, my book might not be your cup of tea, but you know what? I don't care. What I do care about is that you insulted a reader who explained himself or herself properly with words that don't even align properly with the commenter's argument. Why just bash some random stranger? Does it make you feel better with that haughty attitude of yours? Well, I think our hard a proper name: cyberbullying. It might not be as harsh as that, but a single word can change someone's life.

And really, what does your review say anything about the novel itself? NOTHING! Ha, what a surprise! Not. Just what is your problem?

This whole section is to tell me what improvements I need in my writing, not just to bash me or readers who stand up for me.

And yes, I'm a kid, but who hasn't been one? Are you looking down on a person for their age? That's just really stupid considering you don't even know that I'm in advanced grade levels and some colleges are sending emails daily for me.

I'm not a pro at writing, I don't plan to become one. I started the whole gig because I wanted to vent to something since I couldn't do that with so many things around me. But I've come to gradually like it. I know that I need improvements and this is what the section's for.

Now, I feel like I really wasted my time here, writing a whole essay to a mere bad reviewer.

You know what, just let me say this: try writing yourself asshole. 凸^-^凸

Also, dude, or dudette, whatever, my novel is pretty high ranking!

I checked your account stuff, and you've only been here for several months! By no means am I a stalker-even if I was, I wouldn't be stalking you-, but it's pretty obvious that my novel is well accepted by this community even if it's BL.

The book you voted on the comments for isn't even 100 somethingth ranked! And my novel goes to the top 100s often when my readers set their minds to vote power stones for it! I'm not dissing that book or its author, I'm just dissing you, for reading a novel which you probably didn't like the genre of.

So just suck it up.

With Immense Love凸^-^凸,

thisworldofmine1

Just letting you all know, I hold grudges easily and never forget them. And I've even bashed teachers of my siblings and they've gotten in trouble(the teachers I mean). I might be not as vicious as those revenge-seeking OP FLs, but I do seek revenge as viciously as them. It's my personality, so to that rude reviewer: fuck off.

I think all my readers know by now, I've been pretty diligent when I had enough time, to write. I'm busy in RL, and you guys are pretty understanding, so that helps. And I hope that all of you think I'm polite and kind. And for the people in real life that I know, I don't spout or write cuss words except on my novels. So you can tell how much this person pissed me off.

So for all readers, how about you just help me go diss that person? He should be at the 2nd to last place for reviews. Maybe I'll give you guys a bonus chapter over next week or something.

Sorry to all who are offended by this "chapter" of sorts. I'm just thoroughly annoyed at how the person would bash a reader who's got nothing to do with my novel being rated bad.

And again, thank you RuYui! ^^

Edit:

To readers who haven't seen the fiasco, the review has been deleted and the reader has been banned. And the more "elder" readers will be able to tell you how bravely they banished that troll.

I know this isn't the best solution, but as the mean reviewer said, I'm a kid. How can I just keep myself calm if somebody who stood up for me got caught up in this kind of mess? So, again, sorry if this bothered anyone.

Anyways, all I'm saying is, read up to at least a decent amount of chapters, possible to 45, since that's when the apocalypse starts.

Thanks for reading. ^^