My Way To You

you do inspire me a lot dear. please keep writing. this book needs all the exposure it can get. thank you for writing this book author. you need to improve a bit in your grammar and description,that's all i can say. but its really good book. kisses!

I have read your work until Chapter 26 and here is my review that reflects my thoughts about your writing Writing Quality - No complaints there. You seem proficient enough in English which is a plus in my book. Atleast, I don't have to keep correcting the tenses or verbs as I read. Thank God for that 🙂🙂 Stability of Updates - This doesn't matter to me much since sometimes a writer needs more time to flesh out the details. I myself sometimes scrap the overall first draft and start anew with a different plot/mindset in some chapters. Also, as a voracious reader myself, I had rather have the author concentrate on quality than quantity. Story Development - The story started off with gruesome things happening to the MC. Being sold off to a brothel by your mother just because your father couldn't keep his hands off you might leave a person physiologically imbalanced. With the first chapter, it becomes clear that it's not going to be a slow dragging process which sets the pace nicely but at times it's too fast and leaves the reader lagging behind with their mind stuck on something else. Character Design - The author doesn't fall into the quagmire of the stereotypical characters which is a plus. On the other hand, I feel the author can work a bit more on it and add a bit more gravitas to their thoughts and future development. World Background - Hmmm.... Maybe the author should work a bit more on this but that might just be my own preference and other readers are fine with the way things are. Hopefully, this review will help the author and they won't come with lit torches and sharpened knives at me while being asleep. 🙂🙂🙂

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The synopsis is quite interesting and different from the others.... The plot will drag you to the story itself... The character background is good too... I hope The main lead find what she's looking for..... Fighting!!! Keep it up author...

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The plot and synopsis are interesting, and something I've been trying to find which was why I was so excited when I found this novel. However, your grammar needs working on and the situations in the novel are too fast paced that it makes my head hurt reading it. I'm constantly confused when one situation moves to the next so quickly.

Even though I think it’s a good story, I have only read about 10 chapters before dropping it. I simply can’t get hooked into dark stories, but if somebody can ignore that parts, then it’s a fine novel. The plot moves pretty fast, and I enjoyed the way the MC progressed. The story is written properly, with barely any noticeable grammar mistakes. The only downside to the novel would be the slow update rate, but the chapters are pretty long so it’s not tragic.

Interesting story, though it moved a bit too quickly for my liking, but that's just my personal preference. In particular, I feel like the development with Lady Zula developed a bit too quickly. I do like how the story is developing so far, and how the MC is coming along in character. The descriptions are vivid and the readers get a better sense of what is happening in the story. I enjoyed reading the story so far! Keep up the good work, author! :) Hoping to see more soon.

Getting there. It's interesting and it would be nice to see how things develop. Definitely darker then the first book but it keeps you captivated. The updates are slow though... but can be forgiven with the amount of descriptive food, world development and variety of characters. Keep up the good work. :)

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You have a lot going in there so I’m not going there because you don’t know me when I’m done ✅ you need a good night I don’t think 🤔 I wanna play pool

You guys have just finished my house 🏠 I have just been a lot more fun and then I’m not gonna it I want it and it’s fun and I’m so pretty and you can’t go to the other side