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The Three Heavenly Cultivations: Body, Mind & Soul

Author: TheOmnipotentOtaku
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Mav12
Mav12Lv13

Reveal spoiler

Spixxy
SpixxyLv15

I read it. Will be a follower for sure. Looking forward to more to be honest. Thanks for also rating my book. I guess we both have to thank Ayden.🤣 Also a quick question. How do u make a cover page?

Rashmi01
Rashmi01Lv6

I have been following this story from the beginning and the best thing I like about it is its originality. The characters are a bit weird to begin with but it seems they will grow and mature with the story. The story is going well till now and I can't wait to see the changes in MC and others. Overall I would say uts z very good work. I'll suggest more careful editing, though. Thanks for your hard work, author.

TheOmnipotentOtaku
TheOmnipotentOtakuAuthor

Well, this is for all the readers out there. I haven't got any comments on the recent chapters, so I request all of you to comment on what you don't like, or what is bad. That way, I can improve the story. Please review as well, which will point out my mistakes. As of now, I have 37k views, and out of those 37k people, just about less than 10 are giving comments and reviews.

NewNEET
NewNEETLv5

Really need a lot of spacing dude.. Just full of words on my phones screen.. And thats annoying.. Hopefully u can edit that......................................................

Aydendaanial0910
Aydendaanial0910Lv2

Like it. You are one of two original writers i think have potential. I will support both of you. Too many fan fictions out there who in my opinion just steal other peoples stories and start a side story with it. I plan to find one more original story writer to support. Now 2 selected, one more to go. Both un rated so far so u have my support. I will ask the other author to also read yr book. Both of u are neck to neck on chapters. The other original story i follow is called the devil's weapon maker. You 2 shd support each other and feed and grow off each other in my opinion. Allow me to be the link.

TheOmnipotentOtaku
TheOmnipotentOtakuAuthor

Hey guys... PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE write reviews, 0 stars will also do, but, PLEASE write! I still haven't been given a star rating because of insufficient reviews! PLEASE!

TheOmnipotentOtaku
TheOmnipotentOtakuAuthor

This is my first work. Please support it and write good reviews. I promise it will exceed your expectations (I guess so). The story will surely get interesting. Please read, vote and give good reviews!

Rashmi01
Rashmi01Lv6

The main character looks interesting. The story seems to be developing nicely at the right pace. Looking forward to twists and turns full of humour. Way to go!

Rashmi01
Rashmi01Lv6

Great! This is the first chapter and it started with a fine amount of comedy! I believe that this will become very interesting in the future!

Niko91
Niko91Lv5

I got to ch. 44 and we get some action but wow 40 ch. to describe the cultivar world and aspect and they diden't explain nothing , how dose it have a 4.8 i don't know.

Motup
MotupLv5

I have just finished reading volume 1 of this novel. I think its a very nice original piece of work and I enjoyed the development of main character till now. In the initial chapters, it bothered me a bit that the kids were reckless but guess that's going to change as they get serious with cultivation. Hope to see more interaction between different characters as its solely focussed on the MC till now. Good work by the author!

zd4zaas
zd4zaasLv1

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

Daoist1rvBov
Daoist1rvBovLv1

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HappyMan
HappyManLv5

I don't really understand the in the beginning but I like the mc though...Well i will read later chapters and see what happens... ... .. .. ..