Tsukino_Kimiko
Great story so far author! Two people shall surely have a long road ahead of them... Can't wait to read more~ Can't wait for Lillie to lose that ego of hers to Ethan... hehehe (evil laugh) ψ( ` ∇ ´ )ψ Oh and also for the brother to get whipped into shape! bwahahaha! These two siblings need to get whipped!
Although the premise is good (namely a strong, powerful, rich, intelligent, and capable female lead), the writing quality isn’t up to par. The grammatical errors are too many wherein there are mistakes in every paragraph. There is room for improvement. I suggest the author finds a proofreader who’s proficient in English to correct her issues with spelling, word choice, prepositions, punctuation, sentence structure, and verb tense. Doing so will capture and retain her audience because the story is funny and unique.
Such an interesting novel, am so happy for Ethan and Lillie 🤰🤰🤰 Little bun in the oven 🤭🤭🤭, I REALLY hope that they psychopath enemies wouldn't come hurting for the little guy that's on the way, and looking forward to read how the three MEN would really torture Ethan, when they break the news to the family 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
I recently stumbled upon this novel and I'm glad I did! Interesting story with fierce FL and equally strong ML. No unnecessary characters and scenes are described quite nicely. The only down side I see is the update schedule. I hope it gets to be updated more regularly because it's really addicting! 😅 Thank you dear author! 🙇♀️
Great! I like how strong Ethan and Lilie are......... ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........ ........