Although the premise is good (namely a strong, powerful, rich, intelligent, and capable female lead), the writing quality isn’t up to par. The grammatical errors are too many wherein there are mistakes in every paragraph. There is room for improvement. I suggest the author finds a proofreader who’s proficient in English to correct her issues with spelling, word choice, prepositions, punctuation, sentence structure, and verb tense. Doing so will capture and retain her audience because the story is funny and unique.
