Comments of chapter undefined of in the world of Naruto ... (a few years before?)

SO HARD TO READ WTFH( what the f**king hell)

lol what the? hard to read.

This is really hard to read. AUTHOR PLEASE GET AN EDITOR

Didnt underestand a thing

my eyes bleed

You would sooner go blind reading this than using mangyeku eye or however they call it from the uchiha clan

??????????????????????????????????????????????? ithink the author is thinking about himself,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,pummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm something fell in his head and the author died and reincarnated not knowing how to construct a good sentence

what with all that crap? so many thing i really don't need to know? i really don't know if im reading in first or third person this... the perspective it's really weird.

Lol did he just spartan kick him lol

My eyes hurt evertime i try to read this first time i got past the first chapter xD

i thought my IQ was the problem until I saw the comments

i just use skip no jutso

Wtf did i just read???? Hahahahha

Wtf is going on here??!!

kind of ard to read but i wish you luckXD

I skip to the end lol

Good story concept but writing problems

what the hell is this **** is so hard to understanding