Comments of chapter undefined of Revenge: Queen of the Fashion World

I really like the concept behind it all. I love light novels like this! There's some noticeable discrepancies between present and past tense in this chapter, along with some spelling and general grammatical errors. If these are touched up, it might help grab the reader into the story!

Interesting. Hope you have editors to help you out with errors. Your novel looks promising, just needed to weed out those darn grammar mistakes. I will be adding this to my library. Good luck and hope to see more of your works

Its a good start.....

I really like the idea. The typos and grammar mistakes are a little distracting but not too bad. A more careful editing will do the job. Oooh. Can't wait for her to get her revenge against her evil sister.

I already love ❤️ it. I want her to find a new love ❤️😣

Good start of story🙂🙂🙂

Wow qidian add a lot of good novels lately, this is one of them

I like ot. Rebirth pleeassseee

continue the story don't make it a rebirth I have enough of them in my library already

Very interesting novel. Shall continue reading it.

Nice. Liking it already

I would’ve held onto the arm, even if it is only for dragging her down the cliff with the MC

Nice start..

Wow

looks promising.

i am way into it already. keep it up

Hmm...will be interesting....looking forward to it..

I like this start😊😊

I'm a bit late to this HAHAH but it's a good start! The beginning of the novel could, perhaps, use a few more variations in sentence structure instead of using multiple ****** sentences in a row! So alternate between short and long sentences to make the story flow better! 😍

Good start