Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnation Of The Businesswoman At School
Reincarnation Of The Businesswoman At School
Warm Color Su
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This is a translation right? I thought this stoty is familiar until i remembered that novel which is also a translation but was dropped i think because there were no more updates, it was a bummer back then because i was really interested in the story. I hope this translation will not be dropped like the first one, the other translation's title if i remember correctly is: Rebirth and rise the campus business woman
I’ve read too much already that this doesn’t really affect me or my interest.... though judging from a chapter 1 is harsh... Hopefully the story can pan out into a good one. Drugged by someone close to you and backstabbed by the one you love/fiancé. Some kind of marriage agreement is put off. Someone is pregnant?, something died, someone destroyed your family... revenge? Backstabbed by fiancé/sister/mother/father/uncle/aunty/literary anyone that hates you. AND Left to die/disgraced/alone/poor/casted off/etc etc BUT Story starts with the MC/MFC gaining cheats all of a sudden and defies everything even God.
I feel as though you don’t really know the concept of ‘show don’t tell’. You’re not providing any imagery for what’s happening. The beginning is cliche and generic and there is no clear scene painted in front of me. What you are trying to say isn’t being portrayed the way you want it to and this is just me being honest. I think this story has potential, so I’ll keep going.
