The One Luna

Pinoy at work .. hurhur .....................................................................................................................................................................................................

Just read this novel. If that wasn't enough here is what is expected to see genre wise: Kingdom building, game elements, action, romantic sub-plot, not a harem, evolved beasts, zombies, evolution, other races besides humans. Also this author is really good at writing and building up the world.

The filipino flavor you blend in here always tugs a smile on me. As a fan of web novels i always have to look up terms used in the novels setting as i am mostly unfamiliar to the culture used in the novel especially chinese and japanese novels, but being a pinoy myself reading this has been a refreshing journey. Keep up the good work.

It’s really nice to read about the place where i am right now.. Plus the additional info about my own country’s myths and legend and history. I hope updates will be more frequent and that this one will not be dropped. By the way, the moment i read the title i knew the author is also a filipino. Nice humor author..👍

This is one of the best apocalyptic story’s so far if only it didn’t take 30 chapters to leave the city. Also does not get into the mass fight unless they are important. Not the best character development but there are not 3 chapters to each of them thank god. So great story and good kingdom growth.

hi author! I will recommend this to my webnovel friends! pinoy here! kabayan! problems in the story that need to be fix.. not a review just my issues about the novel.. 1. character reactions of the world altering events are dry like its normal and they expected it happening. 2. there is a plothole about the first kill.. not realistic at all. for example - if there is a guy already holding a gun in practice shooting.. a soldier.. bank robberry.. shootout.. civil war and the likes or just a paranoid guy that always had a gun by his side.. is the person above the one that will make the first kill? or a gamer holding a wooden club? that is for the 1st and 2nd chapters obvious mistakes.. suggestion for the first problem.. make them more human.. imagine yourself as the mc and the other characters to person in RL you know of.. for the 2nd.. make it the first 1000 or 100 to kill or react the fastest to be rewarded by the treasure then in the PH make him one of the top ten PH firsts.. or the number one.. me keeps reading this and may god bless you! Im proud to know that PH authors are now writing novels here..

I love this novel! It isn’t like a lot of novels on here that is half baked or go off on tangents a lot. This one is really good. The story is great and I love the romance and the action in it. It creates a balanced story with a great plot. Looking forward to more!

this novel is scary, my soul almost flew out of my body because of the boldness and psycothic actions of the mc, is like is smiling yet not smiling like a devil wanting to eat its prey, like a wolf in rabbit clothes u.u

10 month still can't bare to remove this novel from library and still re-read this novel again and again too bad bbbbb hhh

4 chapters in, and I can't recall any of the characters expressing human emotions besides wanting to bone the obligatory "otherworldly beauty" introduced in ch. 2. Zombies litterally teleport in front of the MCs, and without a hint of surprise, fear, or confusion they immediately execute them. Not only that, but immediately after, these inexperienced gamers dispatch multiple zombies without a scratch (as a scratch would infect them.) These characters are empty, emotionless, and capable of doing anything the story asks them to perfectly.

This novel is really good, the concept with mmorpg and kingdom building is really good. The grammar is good and is really unique. DON'T DROP AUTHOR u.u

I had to take a break from binging this novel in order to write a review, cause it needs all the applause. Coming from a certified novel addict , trust me. This is a good one. Definitely one of the better, if not best, post apocalyptic novels on this site. Nothing cringe inducing or over dramatic so far. No overly ***** or arrogant MC . Everything seems to be quite realistic and the slight romance stuff introduced seem quite organic and not forced or overly mushy/silly. This is not a gore fest with slavery/rape/extreme nationalism/misogyny being constantly rubbed in your face till you choke (I’m looking at you God and Devil World). The plot seems well thought out and grammar is fine with minor mistakes but nothing enough to detract from enjoying the novel. I think this little gems definitely got great potential and I highly recommend this for anyone into the system/nation building/post apocalyptic genres.

Plz dont let this end up like god and devil world. That book had great promise and had the same genres as this book but went down the drain.

MC and me lives in the same city..... Interesting so far... Story looks promising hope it doesn't go premium before 100 chapters............ .

Honestly this story is better than many published light novels. The main strong point of this novel is the stability of the story as well as systematic approach. Definitely one of my favorites.

I like the concept of merging our local city, Bacolod and a glimpse of the RPG (Role-Playing Game) world! It’s promoting the city and the country while giving out that RPG experience to the readers. Definitely looking forward to the next chapters. 😊

Can we know if you dropped the book or not it was really great.

Absolutely amazing! You fall in love with the characters so fast, and Maxene's naming sense is godly. This is one of the books that I have enjoyed most on this site! Keep up the great work LittleFatty!

I felt i should leave a small review here, as when I read the other reviews before picking it up, I noticed a lot of people praising it for the philippino references, which made me believe this I might mainly cater to that audience. However, after giving it a go, I noticed that not only are the references well explained, they're quite witty and interesting, and as someone from Scandinavia, I had no trouble enjoying it. The overall story so far is well written, with no consistent spelling mistakes to my recollection, and with good character development. As far as world building goes, there's not much to build on our present reality, but the settings are well described and easily gives you a good immersion into the surroundings. I started off with a healthy dose of scepticism, but this is now the novel I'm looking most forward to every day!

Man I love this story. Not only is the story great but the info on the Philippines is awesome. I live in the Philippines and just reading this I have learned a lot as well as my pinoy wife. Recommend the story to everyone and if you like the Philippines you will learn a lot about the areas and the mythology.