Tearing_Sanctuary
The writing quality needs to be improved and the more one writes the better they get. Although I understood the concept of this novel, the dialogue between characters are hard to follow (who said what...?). I assuming English is not the first language; be patient with author if you read this gem. There is some contradiction between, the present tense and past tense, especially with sentence structuring...which can be fixed with editing. Overall good job author your writing gets better with each chapter that is read. Keep it up!
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