Reviews of Death Flag

Hello everyone! The author of both Memory Fragments and this one, Death Flag is here to listen to your thoughts about the story. It will be my pleasure to hear your thoughts for the improvement of the story. This will be my second webnovel and I know that I am still new here, but it will be a big help to hear from all of you as improvement for me as a writer to provide all of you a quality over quantity type of story. Thanks and have a good day!