No longer a novel.

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Just found it yesterday just finished reading what was available and......... it was fantastic.... don't care what others say, said or going to say the author has his own beautiful creation that I would hope to read more chapters of and await for the next page with vigeras enthusiasm for the authors generous gift from his own time.

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The problem with the story is that it to often feels like the MC is just monologuing and talking directly to the reader instead of telling a story. The story idea and background are excellent, its how its written that is the problem. I also don't like how fake and retarded the MC's mother acts. The characters also often simply talk way to much.

I really enjoy the story so far, but i think you should slow down on how quickly your mc grows cause most people make a super op mc and forget all about the story and then drop it or restart losing a bunch of readers. While you don't have that problem yet, if the mc keeps growing at this rate then it might and i really like this story and don't want to see that happen.

Within the first paragraph I spotted multiple grammar issues,the first chapter is riddle with them,due to this I couldn't get into the story at all.The conversation between character made 0 sense, to all prospective readers with any proficiency in English read the first chapter and you'll understand.

English is not my language, so if you understand this comment from Google translator, know that this is the best thing I've read, esntao write more and I accepted my stones

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This is absolutely amazing. I would recommend it for anyone and everyone who love marvel rebirth stories. The character is developed extremely well and the plot line is amazing(even though I have ambivalent feelings to how jean grey is portrayed).

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Great story, although the mc needs to slap up all these racist mofos on sight, he’s a stark and a mutant, he can pretty much do what he wants to trash, would be 5* but updates need to be more regular