Comments of chapter undefined of Lord Shadow
Lord Shadow
Keikokumars
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Better be but I've had my fill of the whole shes only for me bull then runs of and fucks more woman. So don't make it a harem and dissapoint me
DeathLingers:Dropped this long ago, seems that it was getting ruined by harem and Loki was also not trying to change the future. An incedent that happens much later where he could've intervened to stop yet did nothing further complicating things. So much for trying to change the future Loki pretty much quickened the boring ass cheating he did and other things
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Keikokumars
I feel like the editor in here needs a little bit of help, like I can patch things in my mind that it doesn't really bother me, but to give this novel the credit it deserves not look like it was written by a child. I think you need help on the grammar part of the translation. Like having the word ' is ' when you mean this. Or mixing present tense and past tense and the form of a sentence. You have the words but usually I can see it written better if you change the order of words. Look for one or more people to help.
Thank you for the chapter. I found it a little anoying that the MC doesn't tell Sophie that there is an enemy nearby and instead just keeps playing with her about now knowing how to swim. It would be ok it he was trying to test if the could find the enemy herself, but there is no indication this is the case.
