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Reviews of Harry Potter and The Mystical Journey

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Harry Potter and The Mystical Journey

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Lucifer_6666
Lucifer_6666Lv3Lucifer_6666

It's really cool......... .. Please update more chapters..... ..... I will donate one power stone to you daily....... Best of luck... 💗 And I would really love it if you introduced Dumbledore soon........

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Claudenyr1
Claudenyr1Lv5Claudenyr1

Reveal spoiler

576576576
576576576Lv3576576576

nice job author.... i need more caps... im not vicious..... its just..... ahhhh ****, im a vicious.... Who am I trying to fool? 140, 140, 140, 140, 140, 140, 140, 140, 140, 140, 140, 140

Rakshasa_Daoist
Rakshasa_DaoistLv3Rakshasa_Daoist

Nice fan-fic. Keep up the good work really appreciate it. All my stones are riding on you.......................140....................140.................................140..................................................?

Draconical
DraconicalLv14Draconical

It is almost impossible to find an amazingly creative and original twist on a very prominent and well-known story. It's quite nice to finally see one and I hope to God that it isn't dropped. This is by far my favorite fan-fiction I've read in a very long time. Remember to take constructive criticism to heart and remember it, but do not fall to the insults and jealousy that others will throw at you. I hope you will continue this novel as I can see the immense potential it contains, and I promise you it will take you to the top. Keep it up fallingsword, you are doing very well.

saini9878
saini9878Lv5saini9878

My first review and it goes to you. Love the story .keep it up and plz dont drop it ..thanks👌👍 and i like character build up and how a strong body means big container .stronger the body larger the magic reserve..!!!â˜ș

TrueFamine
TrueFamineLv5TrueFamine

Awesome Harry Potter fanfic, it's well written and exciting. Mc is smart and powerful and does things almost exactly how I wouldve , love this story keep it up.

Lucifero
LuciferoLv6Lucifero

Love this story keep up the good job😍👍.

PrahalladM
PrahalladMLv5PrahalladM

Wow****** the story is awesome Nice twist with the reincarnation.... But the Story development is breathtaking Nice work........ Hope there was more chapters!!!!!! But overall very interesting

PrahalladM
PrahalladMLv5PrahalladM

Please release more chapters!!!! It's one of the best book I have ever read. Awesome book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

opg287
opg287Lv4opg287

This is undoubtedly one of the best fanfics I have ever read. I am a big fan of the Harry Potter series and never imagined that I would enjoy this story so much. Keep up the good work Author!!!

UzumakiIchigo
UzumakiIchigoLv10UzumakiIchigo

Great story. One of the best starts I have read so far. I liked your introduction to using scientific knowledge from his past world to make his magic easier and more powerful. Keep it up. Thanks for the hard work.

kobuface
kobufaceLv2kobuface

This was a nice connector between worlds of fiction and a type of reality. The segway was nice. It left me with a few questions that might make add to the story. In the first chapter, I wondered why Minerva decided to talk to the Dursleys instead compared to the original. I got the point that the character will likely change the story as he goes based on his memory, but I don't think I understood where the change suddenly came in. Although it was a better way of going for sure to try and build the trust of the Dursleys. As the new Harry sought to gain favour with the family we didn't really hear how Dudley was at 8 and how Harry and Dudley interacted. Did Harry attempt to build trust with Dudley as well even though it is alluded that he might be a bit of a nuisance? I liked the explanation of magic in this I wonder though with the original scene where Harry's magic started with the encounter with the snake where danger made the magic begin, despite the character's growth, is he using magic yet or just holding the power? Any way I am curious about where the story will go and how different it will be. Keep going. It seems like a good start.

Daoist_sky
Daoist_skyLv13Daoist_sky

Good begining and potential for the storyline. With future stable updates and creative process this fanfiction can actually blossom into something that can enter into the top ten webnovel rankings. An undiscovered gem.

PommyJosh
PommyJoshLv11PommyJosh

Really amazing start to this novel, I am not that many chapters into the story yet however, if the current quality is upheld I can see this climbing very high in the current ratings. Definitely give this story a chance, you won’t regret it!

Nautical
NauticalLv3Nautical

Great story...keep it up!!! -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Durruti
DurrutiLv12Durruti

Well i like the novel so far, waiting for mlre chapters and hope that the novel dont drop. Thanks for the novel and good work. And i hope that ron is not more idiot than the original jajjajaja.

darkness_lord
darkness_lordLv5darkness_lord

It’s really a good harry potter fanfic, for What i read, with a good development of characters and explanations of magic. You should continue writting. And sorry for my poor english.

Ley
LeyLv10Ley

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Dator_David
Dator_DavidLv13Dator_David

Excuse me. I really like this story. I'm REREADING chapters again. Author please update your story or even pass it on to another author? You could even make it a joint book