Reviews of don't run, my sweety
don't run, my sweety
Cecilia2323
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I donβt think I can read this anymore- I have OCD with the English language and grammar... IM FROM ENGLAND GADDAMNIT, I really canβt help it. Especially as someone who majors in English. But the story was at least somewhat interesting. Somewhat.
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The story is so far interesting and well thought out but due to the grammar errors the reading flow is disturbed. Those errors also make the conversations a little awkward and I personally stop at every other error to correct it in my mind. I think it would be good chouce to find somebody/ an editor who can correct some of them before the new updates. It is one of the best original stories I have found so far but sadly not one of the best reads.
This novel is just awesome!!! So good itβs even inspired me to write my first review ever! Finished reading all 56 chapters in one go, nonstop! Itβs so addicting. Canβt wait to read more! Even so, there are some grammar mistakes, itβs easy to understand, what author meant to write. Strongly recommend it π
There was some good love drama. The male lead is somewhat rude and overly possessive, but it's not a hopeless case, I feel that love will change him into a better person. Although, he's not perfect from the start, he is not over the top like some other male leads, at least he's bearable, and his imperfections even make things more spicy (know what "spicy chicken" means, LOL? =) But I mean "spicy" in the good sense - interesting flavor). The female lead is a strong OP character with system cheats. Also there are some nice friends from the male's side and pretty funny interactions with green tea sister villainess.
The story overall has a good plot line and is very thought out. Although there are somegrammatical errors are there, the story still flows pretty well. I like the story and the characters. It's a story I sit and wait for updates because it's good enough to keep my interest! I respect the Author for their talent and ability to write a good story!
why the **** did he bring her with Himont mission to protect the president ? it's not like she's a part of special force team or something. Firstly, the goal she went to that special force in the first place is to learn how to defend herself not to kill or be a member of that team. Second, he asked her to sign agreement or something to monitor and investigate all his family's members. like hell< I don't understand anything here. > . what's the point of marry her in the first place? if his family has a rule that need to undergo training and pass it in order to become his wife, then why did u **** her until the original body owner died? why? Also, do u expect a university student major in jewel to pass all those kinds of thing in the first place? The way he treat her like a playthings to release his sexual things is quite terrible. He didn't treat her like a human being but playthings. Do u expect such a person to hold the position of captain of a special force??? Such a psycho??? Finally, What the **** did his family do exactly here? His grandmother controls nation economic while his grandfather holds the position of commander and he's the captain of special force and here the mission is to protect the president or what not..... Author tell me what do u want to write exactly here??? It's all mess up. I don't know about other comments cos they only mentioned grammar errors but I would like to mention about plots here. Could you please make good structure and set a specific goal or direction for your novel. You can not let MC run around and do things all over the places without direction or goal.