ArchlordZero
This story was great the plot and it's characters. And for me, I really like it so I recommend it to others to read. I'm not being bias, it just get to my heart. I wish you will give us some wonderful work. Thank you!!! I love it. Fantastic and magnificent, your story is the best. Even though that I like more on action story with the touch of fantasy, I really like your story. But to think that I will fell in love in this story was unbelievable also I really like it thank so much.
I honestly think the book has potential, but itβs held back mainly by one principle. Show, donβt tell. What you do is show, and then tell. For instance show how the MC feels about the past love by using emotions when she shows up. Donβt do that, then also tell us βoh yeah her, I hate her ass, she cheated on me.β
This a great novel. So addicting. Characters are great and interesting. Twists are great and the action parts are keeping me all up. GREAT WORK AUTHOR. I'll try to check out your other books. Wish you well.ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ