Reborn in the Narutoverse

Good luck with the novel love it.

1 From the very beginning there was nonsense why he decided to be born together with Naruto for what ? to be Naruto 's dog ? but it 's okay 2 why did he decide to run to Konoha to ask for asylum ? he has a map of the world, he could choose security until he becomes strong, but not at the age of 4, he ran to konoha sorry, but I would pee myself out of fear with the power of chunin to go to konoha and be a rare pedigree cool what's here))) 3 the most disgusting thing is that a dragon appeared, I threw on this fairy tale in short, the slope of the beginning was 8, but then lower and lower, and in general I did not see his training

Гг добрый помогает всем это просто ужасно это все равно как 2 Наруто и просто бесит такое поведение поэтому такая оценка🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕

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wow look at all these bots, this novel is a solid 2/5 but all the bots you have giving you 5 stars is a big tell that your novel is a dumpster fire. MC is apparently Budda and gives everything away to the village and people around him. Just stupid honestly

mah its a decent story but i would put this in low level compared to the pther stories i read. My main problem with this is that the characterization of the side characters around the MC, its seem to me they are designed just to accept everything the MC do with no question on how, why, and what. overall you can still read this story its not really that bad but if your used to reading high quality fanfic and novel dont bothered reading this.

I would say I love the author but hate where the story ended up. I blame karma, it creates a mechanism to encourage being good to everyone and that universally creates a dull MC, I'm wanting imperfection - it's okay to be vengeful, hateful, or greedy; without flaws man can't relate to the world and it all feels so impersonal. I like his wife and ability though, and that all is well thought out, making sense.

Love the novel the MC has an interesting bloodline and the changes hinted to the original story seem interesting hope the updates keep coming .

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Just first chapter is enough for every proper reader with a little bit of respect to logic for understanding that we've got a chinese mob here. Naruto based on journey to west, rikudo used star energy to get his powers....each of his conclusions makes me think even less about chinese people (not a racist but if a nation calls themselves blessed ones and still uses death penalty, then there's not a bit of respect for such....)

I just dont like the Mc and how he acts

1 motivo para NÃO LER: Sistema. Sinceramente, a falta de criatividade é tanta que os autores simplesmente colocam 'sistema' para desenvolver sua história. Patético e sem criatividade. [img=faceslap]

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thank you for this great novel a very great story with great new ideas but can you please tell us if its dropped or are you just busy cause its been a long time since you put up a new chapter

i like the background story and how it develops. really good.

So far so good hoping for u to hurry up though .... I binged read it...😅 140 characters

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