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Dungeon Prowler : One Man Army

Author: yassertlm
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Chenglei
ChengleiLv11

This Novel is actually well thought out. The characters aren't just ****** cardboard cut-outs and actually have some depth in them, same goes for the protaganist. Furthermore, different then most protaganists in other novels, this one is actually smart! The only thing that would probably discourage readers is the slow build-up. The MC does not start off with some Ultimate power-up or "the golden finger" but instead slowly learns from an interesting group of teachers. (Don't misunderstand though... the MC does indeed have something incredibly Unique that other characters don't, but unlike other Novels, this MC actually does hard-work.) Another thing that could really bug the reader is the Grammar... I won't sugar coat it. It's bad. He rarely misspells words but I swear man... THE I's!!! The godamn I's!!!! They are ALL lower-cased!! And so are the fukin names!!! C'mon author-kun 😢😢 why u do dis? *Cough* *Cough* I apologize... but these were seriously bugging me throughout the chapters... Sooo... yeah. This Novel is cool. Just need to fix some things and BAM! SSS Quality Novel! PS : There are some run-ons too. (Author try splitting the paragraphs even more please. They are too big and blocky.)

FreakingFox
FreakingFoxLv14

This story is a wonderful contradiction. The entire story has a lighthearted feel despite times overwhelmingly bleakness and cruelty. The carefree attitude of the Mc and his band of teachers, lovers, and friends carries the story. Their unyielding dedication to being uninhibited and their dedication to one another brings a smile to my face every time. If you want a novel that will make you smile through the dark times and laugh without even realizing this is the story for you.

SileNeshoba
SileNeshobaLv11

This book is very hard not to read. The adventure is great and the author comments back. Yunan seems op, but he has drawbacks too and the laughs you find are a great break from the dundeon diving. Read!!!! I implore you to read because you will miss out otherwise.

Boong
BoongLv15

Hidden gem of a novel, made my heart full of joy and happiness. The story is very good and good story pace.................................

Voodoo
VoodooLv14

I really enjoy the story, also if you want to know what's happening give the story a try. Also has daily releases. Author keep up the great work

Linda2172
Linda2172Lv5

I love how each relationship with his friends and loved ones he takes The time to fully understand there wants and needs even if they don't understand them selves he takes The time to nurture each one.The story is constantly developing and keeps you wanting more.I find it quite enjoyable keep up the excellent work.

Midget_Slayer
Midget_SlayerLv14

Starting from the beginning, author gives a proper explanation for how the MC has developed to become strong and why others are not as strong as he will be (MC focuses on being all-rounder while most adventurers choose only one specialty), as well as building up the personality of the MC and only a semi build up of other important characters (author has mentioned there will be more chapters that will have MC and Debauchery characters which hopefully give more background and personality to the members). The world background is a little poor, the MC kinda sees the full extent of the world early on (meets the hearts and takes out the biggest threat to the suface in Volume 1), and becomes one of the wealthiest before even entering the dungeon, where he subsequently becomes richer than all of debauchery before even getting halfway through Tartarus it feels like (this may not be true due to not knowing the full extent of power Debauchery has but based on reactions of the members it gives off that feeling). This novel is doing a great job so far by setting some perameaters in terms of strength and how strong MC might become. Foreword before next paragraph, I would not mind one upgrade to universe scale for strength because MC seems way to OP when not even halfway through the dungeon but keep it minimal please. Personally I am not a fan of novels that pull the bull**** storyline of MC becomes strongest only to find out he is part of a tiny continent then becomes strongest again only to find out he is part of backwater world and all that **** where no one knows what the **** the ending to the power level is which pisses me off personally because it feels like it is becoming filler chapters. It just is a repeat storyline that usually involves the same face slapping, and a lil face slap is good here and there but when it’s the same **** just repeating every few hundred chapters it gets old real quick. Overall it is a very good novel that has a slightly slow and boring beginning, and I mean only slightly because when he descends into Tartarus in chapter 109 it picks up very quickly. Chapters are not very long so it is easy to breeze through that bit. My personal favorite type of novels usually involve time skips. I do not mind chapters discussing training but it needs to just give an overview and then progress the story, it gets very boring when to much is described then redescribed. I do not need to know how everyday MC does the same **** but experiences something ‘new’ that needs to be written out. Just skip ahead a few weeks or months (hell even a few years if need be) when something actually is going to happen. This novel does an amazing job with time skips. The chapters are short at ~9 pages but something always has happened that progresses the story in each chapter, there are no filler chapters as of yet which is amazing. A chapter can start off with a description of how MC is going to clear a level in the dungeon and then a quick rundown of a fight he has that will be the template of how almost every fucking fight will be BUT author doesn’t repeat the same fight scene ****, he actually time skips a few months ahead to when it is done, ALL in the same chapter. FUCKING. AMAZING. No waiting forever for some **** to finally be done when it could all have been time skipped and the story can actually progress. 5* for writing becomes there are no major grammatical errors and the reading is smooth with no ‘choppy’ English. 5* for stability because everyday there will be 1-2 chapters minimum. 5* for story developments because no filler chapters and no redundant chapters. 4* for character design because MC’s personality is fairly well described but other characters do need some work. 3* for World background because MC seems to have hit the ceiling of the world’s extent waaaaaaay to quickly and I am hoping the full extent of the World will be enlarged and then described fully so we do not have a seemingly infinite cycle of finding out new power levels and such. Easy novel to read and I would rather give it a 5 star rating just for the story progression. Forewarning, there is a harem but it is not that bad and the MC is not actively seeking to enlarge and then forgetting about them.

LGND
LGNDLv10

This novel is amazing by all means The mc character is good and unique I always read this novel before all others when they r updated U never get bored with the story The mc is op Dump luck smart luck pure luck and every type of luck that exist in the world is by our mc side yet he work really hard to the point of insanity to improve himself The way the author has written this novel and the ideas it has is something I've never seen but I find it fascinating and conform with my preferences I give this novel 5/5 The best author in my eyes 👀

Chan_Feng
Chan_FengLv14

I wasn’t a big fan after 25 chapters. Vocabulary was too ******, grammar was lacking, characterization and world building was also off. I’ll glance through a few more chapters I guess but so far it’s a bit “meh”.

AbysmalMelody
AbysmalMelodyLv15

I quite enjoyed the way the story was being told up until the latest chapters. I feel like the newest chapters are immersion breaking because of what Is what goes on in them. They feel rushed and with in book time lapses that weren’t very well portrayed correctly. From around chapter 90 the story starts to break apart the immersion. For example I’m fairly certain from the beginning of the book the debauchery party was said to only have gone as deep as floor 20th and it’s said multiple times but suddenly in one of the latest chapters it’s said they’ve gone down to the 75th floor. At this point I’m not sure if I can continue reading the story because I can no longer be fully immersed with how things are suddenly starting and ending quite udruptly after a big build up.

Noxsen
NoxsenLv11

Feels kinda slow and there are some grammar mistakes, but the overall story seems good at the moment. Hopefully it will get faster once he gets in the dungeon.

54PT4R15
54PT4R15Lv5

5 stars for now "I write it on the premise of being the novel you want to read to lighten up." ....................................................... the way its written its like an essay and i hate essays but ppl might like it so good luck with the endeavors

Pannath
PannathLv13

Interesting story concept once they finally make it to the Dungeon. Fun story so far. The author sets some hard rules about the setting early on the proceeds to break them. Many of the characters were name/based off characters from other famous stories. Also plenty of spelling and grammatical errors; someone needs to check their work before posting and/or get an editor.

LARRY_VAN
LARRY_VANLv15

If you want a novel that will keep you guessing then this is the one that you need to read. The main character is different from the other main characters are like. Enjoy

Ryloth
RylothLv15

Reveal spoiler

Jkesse
JkesseLv14

Reveal spoiler

FlyingApple1234
FlyingApple1234Lv12

A bit I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am I am at the at the end at the end at at

Kadeeek
KadeeekLv4

Would read it but I'm always lazy to read when I see harem tag: 'c ..................................................................................................

Yinghuo
YinghuoLv6

What I found is the most impressive about how the author writes is how he makes every single character feel alive all of them have their own backstory that explain the way they act. Only things that I can criticize is the authors spelling errors from time to time but other than that the story feels alive and can't wait for more.

Archdevil_M
Archdevil_MLv6

I just want to know from where did you got the cover ? Cause i may have seen it being used on RR tho. But anyway i'll try this story of yours and see if it's fun to read