Reviews of The Rainbow World

One chapter in, the author has done a bang-up job of getting the reader to ask several questions about just exactly what is going on and it makes me anxious to read more to find out what precisely the scenario is.

I hope you'll pick this up again sometime! 😀 It's a good start: nice introduction method for the characters, interesting action, some world building, without too much data at once. I like that they have both science and mana, as it gives your characters and story more options. There are a few typos, but otherwise, the wording and grammar are well done. I would give a higher rating, but since this novel is on hold, there are no updates.