Reviews of A New Dawn [Paused for now]

Here we are for a wonderful new adventure. This novel will be a lot more serious than the previous one and in a Thrid Person View. It will be a influenced mainly by Overlord (Ainz Ooal Gown) and The Riftwar Cycle (Pug the magician). First major point, no Harem, second major point, no Harem. I despise, hate and am disgusted by anything related to that thing. First of all, I am incapable of creating a good one and then I always find that romance in novel are utter garbage in general. So no such thing. First real point, the loli MC, well, don't worry nothing illegal will happen. It's just that, I tried to read some female MC novels and they are weird. Meaning that a handsome male lead will appear and the "cold blooded assassin from the 21th century" will inevitably fall in love with him. So don't expect any of thoses things like love or passion. As for the world building, I love WH, so this time it will just be a little more subtle (forget the necrontyr at the beginning). But we will have a lot of races, more real undead this time, more everything. No System, it's a cheap tool that provokes a lot of problems and a huge headache with the numbers, levels, spells, it's a nightmare. As for Update, I would say 4chapters/week bare minimum. Will probably be more, but i won't promise something that I can't achieve. And last thing, don't forget to write the tag for the novel and post any error that you find in the comments. Thank you in advance for that.

Hahaha....Please write more, Mr. Innovation... Looking forward to your next novel... Hope that it will be at least as good as the previous one.... Hahahha......

Just to ruin your 1 star review!!! hahahaha! Can you add some tags to this novel, especially whether its harem or not? As i am a harem hater

From the author of "A Rattling Monster" finally comes another book. So far all good. World got a proper introduction as well as the characters. Writing quality good as well, maybe some minor mistakes here and there but every book have them so no complaining (it's much worse in most cases anyway...). I can't really say anymore since it's really just the beginning and some world building so far. To all who see this review... Give this one a try and while you're at it to A Rattling Monster too. P.S. yes-YESSSSSSSSSS a-another word thingy f-from Innovation manthing. The Great Horned Rat will be pl-pleased!!! YES! YES!!!!!

Please continue writing, it sounds really good, but I don't wanna get addicted to an book that may never be finished😢

In my opinion this novel is one of the very few that are worth reading on this site. As it feels original and well written, both of which are rare over here.

Moar rattling moar evolution less pain on the grubelnuts whit unfinished stuff and cuality dince id rather wait than have another Naruto btw ill change the score when you do

so frustrating that novels like this get abandoned while the haremslop that is ever so popular thrives xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

This story is one of the few gems among gems that you should want to read. I will be frank it will be very slow in the beginning it may seem pointless it may seem annoying and it may feel just wrong with how slow it was going... but it is important, because of the character development,the world building,and future setup it is all worth it to read. Plus who doesn’t love a good Warhammer story?

All I can say is i fuckin love your writing ignore the swear just.... I feel not enough people have seen your Writing and it just bothers me so much I mean such skill... the amount of just ah ok for example the rattling monster it was a system ok sure the start up was... slow so many people disliked and wrote reviews and just saying another plain system story but I stayed and... oh my if only every story was like yours just it brings me happiness to read stuff like this I’ve started to donate every day to you well vote power stones just respect man until I find someone better at writing (which I doubt will happen) I shall keep voting well.... unless I don’t got internet but please keep your writing up it’s just the best here........

A slow start but after about chapter ten the story becomes very good. I recommend giving it a chance.................................................

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Great novel with intelligent and "evil" mc. It is logical and as far as i can see is no plot armor. The mc and the people on her side are op but due to certain circumstances unable to use their full power (not sealed or anything, but because they want to) the reason is pretty logical and it doesn't change the fact that they are op. The world building is great and iam quite curious how the story will develop further. The writing is pretty good as long as iam concerned even though iam no native speaker. I couldn't find any errors

Since i like the last one, I will give you a five star in advance and comment on the novel later. Stay tuneddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

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