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Comments of chapter undefined of Out of Space

BrianGallacher7
BrianGallacher7Lv14BrianGallacher7

If you upload a picture or map on another site that would be good

Kimara23
Kimara23Lv6Kimara23

Good start. Catches your interest, gives enough info so you aren't confused, but leaves plenty untold so the story can fill it in. Thanks for the story.

Shoon
ShoonLv5Shoon

I guess either I am dumb and I was somehow expected to figure it out myself with the context and all... or maybe It is common knowledge for a native English speaker to know what it meant... But yeah, beside guessing that XO was some sort of military rank, half way through I kinda had to google what it was supposed to really stand for... Well, at least now I know... Executive Officer. Whatever... regardless of that, sound rather interesting so far^^

Tyler89558
Tyler89558Lv5Tyler89558

Space is 3d... so only having turrets on the top side of the ship is like asking to have your enemies come from below.

GamezNoob
GamezNoobLv11GamezNoob

I like it , but it needs an editor to make it easier to read , and fix errors as well.

DaoistLingMing
DaoistLingMingLv5DaoistLingMing

Captain Black: i used to command a battle cruiser but i got zerg on my knee.

H_P_0418
H_P_0418Lv12H_P_0418

Battle cruiser operational.

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Argathus
ArgathusLv5Argathus

Singapore? SINGAPORE! Lol tiny red dot citizens unite!

TheReadingWhale
TheReadingWhaleLv5TheReadingWhale

Word suggestion: use "jutted out" instead of "stabbed out"

Dovah
DovahLv7Dovah

Nice to know this fleet has 2 experienced leaders...the whole team of recent graduates will live longer that way LOL

Dovah
DovahLv7Dovah

Just found this novel! So happy there's something similar to the themes of 'Gate: the JSDF was here'. Actually this seems even better as there doesn't seem to have a harem or romance here (in the tags) LOL Can't wait to start reading xD

Gili
GiliLv11Gili

Ugh, its junst not my novel. I am absolutely unable to follow multiple pov and mc's.

DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv6DarkKnight32

Pls be a dragon xD

Axcart
AxcartLv6Axcart

Wow, less than 900 men on deck? Isn that to little for a heavy?

jarlap
jarlapLv4jarlap

Thanks

Darwinning
DarwinningLv2Darwinning

Interesting start!

baniel_stone
baniel_stoneLv4baniel_stone

explained the well and caps past good start

RedMoonHeroine
RedMoonHeroineLv6RedMoonHeroine

Thank you for the chapter. (^.^)

Yull_Dozza
Yull_DozzaLv1Yull_Dozza

Como cuando tienes la tecnología para viajar por todo el espacio exterior pero aún no hay forma de recuperar una pierna :v

Xega
XegaLv2Xega

hmph time starts now